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for Hot Mazoku Action

by sefiru

schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've so been sucking because I haven't had a chance to review until now but I really love this story. Your humour is great and your sex scenes are dripping hot. No really - double penetration! YOU RULE! And I've never thought about Mukuro/Yukina before but you've got me shipping it.

Seriously though - Yusuke is so uberseme in this. I loved how he made Hiei blush when he was spying on him in the throne room. And Kurama so wants it too. Thanks for explaining the whole hannin thing, I think it fits the three so perfectly.

MOAR.
person Asharra
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice but you have spoiled us before and now... I found it a bit too "controled". Why couldn't you give us a nice lemony shower scene instead of just brushing over it?

Boohoohoo! I wanted my lemon!
person Slashnyaoi
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"No, I am not going to write a Shura/Kuwa fic, so don’t ask."
oh thank god
person gaaraspussy
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooooo! the end in 2 chapters. yeaaaaaaaaaaaa! sequal. noooooo! (emotional) fighting. love it, and i don't think ive reviewed b4, but ive been checking for updates since kurama told his mother about being a demon, so i'll just say that i loved every chapter, even tho i'm fairly certain i've forgotten to review.
person amanda1
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're not going to write a Shura/Kuwa fic cause that would be soooo ewwwwww. I like how you made Yomi react, it suited him. As for Yusuke....he was kind of rude to Botan. You should have him appologize to her. after all he really didn't give Botan time to explain what and why. Yeah Koenma should've came himself instead of watching but still. As for Yukina....good for her!
person MEme
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I ws hoping for some hot Yomi action. Oh well.

Kurama an Hiei, fight? Well, it was bound to happen sooner or later. Oh it'll end up with some make up sex. :)

Looking forward to it,
~MEme
person lijana
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!

You promise there is a sequel....no teasing.

I know you don't do mpreg but they are not exactly 'men' LOL

YukinaxMukuro interesting.

I wanna read KuramaxHiei fighting!!!!!
person LadyShadowDragon
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I don't see Kuwabara surviving very long as a Shura pet. I like the image of Yusuke in that gold ensemble, will Kurama and Hiei attack him once he puts it back on in front of them?? I wonder what Yomi is really up to?
person Katonie
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! there's going to be a lemon next chapter isn't there? woohoo! I can't wait! I'll start baking some more cookies fr you and give them to you next chapter, alright?
Till next time.

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Tephra
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I’ve been working out in the bush (no paved roads let alone internet) for the last few weeks. The thought of new chapters is one of the things that keep me sane until I’m back in civilization. I got a kick out of Hiei playing badminton and the camouflaged manga. I look forward to seeing Botan. As for plot thickener, I’d lend you a cup but I’m fresh out myself.