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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter didn't seem to have as much depth as the others. I'm particularly fond of chapter two. The plot does seem to to be moving along steadily, though. I feel bad for Mukuro, she's so desperate and lonely. Oh well, HieixYusukexKurama action is hotter.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
~MEme
I can't wait for the next chapter!
~MEme
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*still giggling about the Sappho comment* This is great! I love the story so far, please continue.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. How about Keiko and Makuro get together? They suit, Makuro longs for stablity and Keiko is storng enough to hold her own. Can't wait to read more.
Thanks.
Jade
Thanks.
Jade
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Now that kieko is out of the picture lets get to some yaoi lemon!!!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow nice, you do really well shaping up what is happening. can't wait for the next chapter love it ;D
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update!!! ^__________^
I like how you handled Keiko and I am glad that you did not included any Keiko bashing in this fic (to make it believeable Yusuke really cares for her and vice versa. I wish other fanfic writers would get that)
I also suspected as do you, that it was Kurama who had defeated Yomi ^^
I eagerly await the next (hopefully longer) chapter.
I like how you handled Keiko and I am glad that you did not included any Keiko bashing in this fic (to make it believeable Yusuke really cares for her and vice versa. I wish other fanfic writers would get that)
I also suspected as do you, that it was Kurama who had defeated Yomi ^^
I eagerly await the next (hopefully longer) chapter.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh...No hot action*pout* that sucks...did that sound dirty to you? Well, maybe some hot action in the next couple chapters? I'll love you forever either way but...hot action is always a nice touch to a story.
Anyway, update again soon O' Mighty Writer of Hot Stories!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
Anyway, update again soon O' Mighty Writer of Hot Stories!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter! I am so tempted to draw little mini comics for this story! Why does the thought of everyone after Yusuke's sexy boi ass facinate me? lol
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dispense with keiko w/only 5 words? hmmm, i'm intrigued! I hope u update soon...i also hope u intend to make yusuke the uke...0_0 pwease?
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing start.
I'm going on to the next chapter. I like how you incorporated the dialogue from the anime here ^^
Thanks
I'm going on to the next chapter. I like how you incorporated the dialogue from the anime here ^^
Thanks