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for Hot Mazoku Action

by sefiru

person Hemamal
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That went over easily. Finally we get to some lemon!! I thought he was going to lay Kurama first(LOVE YxK!!!!) but I can wait for that. I hope Hiei eats well!!!!!!!
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! "Do you top or bottom?" I think I about died, reading that. Poor Hiei doesn't even know what he is getting himself into, does he?

I am really enjoying this story. Sorry I didn't find it sooner, or I would have left you reviews before this. I guess better late than never.
person Angela
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
evil evil T__T making us wait and drawing it out. but i haven't had this much fun with a yyh fic in a long time, so <3333. Now i gotta wonder how kurama will react now that he's the only one out of the loop ^__^
person Angela
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aff.net ate my review...... O__o

there are not enough Y/h/k fics out there and i love what you're doing with this. ^^ can't wait to see how kurama handles this. ;D
person Katonie
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stringing along is NOT FUN FOR ME!!!!Oh the agony! You make me wait even more?! You really are cruel.*wimperpoutwimper*
*puppy dog eyes*Please upate again soon. I need to see some "Good Stuff"*winkwinknudgenudge* soon! And I'm sure various other readers do as well.
Oh! You're bringing Kurama in soon too, right? I can't wait for even more Hotness to ensue.You know what else is REALLY HOT?! A Botton Hiei! I love you for that, by the way.
Anyway, like I said, update again soon, then I can review again soon too!! Make me happy and I'll give you Hugs & Kisses!!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person kitkit
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lemons are coming up, yum. i do hope to see yusuke on the bottom eventual
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol

loved the chapter.

You know how to keep me on suspence

When is kurama going to be back on the scene?
person kerbear
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay it a chapter!!!And wow Yusukes really going to Have Hiei.I can't wait for the next chapter.Wait till Kurama hears Hiei got it first .This should be fun(I hope)Keeping me on the edgw of the seat is so mean.:)
I hope you update soon,great job
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD ooooooooooo! Now i'm all jumping around in anticipation. I'm really glad Hiei got away and to someplace MUCH better. ^o^ Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
person JLA
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I must express my love for your character portrayals. ^^ "You're the only one I'd share him with." was so typical of both of them! And it made me giggle, especially picturing Hiei thinking/speaking it.

Yay mischief! I can't wait!