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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, my sister was reading me a childrens story while I was reading this. It was weird haha. Anyway...I never commented because I'm a lazyass, but I like this story. It's interesting. Relaxinf. fun. now my sister is shoving a book in my face as I write this. I am a big fan of YusukexHiei <3 So yeah i like this story lol. *bookmarks it*
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God. You. Rock. My. World! In the middle of reading that LOVELY lemon I had to also admire Yusuke's bedroom. I want a room like that! That'd be awesome!
And hey! When is Kurama comin' into the story again. There needs to be some action with him soon, in my opinion! What's a lovely story like this without Kurama action? It wouldn't be a story, that's what!
Anyway, please update again soon, you can even have some cookies ahead of time as persuation to update again.
Till next time!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
And hey! When is Kurama comin' into the story again. There needs to be some action with him soon, in my opinion! What's a lovely story like this without Kurama action? It wouldn't be a story, that's what!
Anyway, please update again soon, you can even have some cookies ahead of time as persuation to update again.
Till next time!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mm mm good. XD i'm loving this so. can't wait for more!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. You're right, Hiei got a big surprise. (Pun intended.) I can't wait to see what happens next and what will happen when the fox joins the mix. Ooo good times for all. ;P
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::swoons:: *0* and i thought i'd have to wait two weeks for this
things are starting to get very interesting and i can't wait to see kurama back in ch 8 ^^
things are starting to get very interesting and i can't wait to see kurama back in ch 8 ^^
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All that could be said is "wow" oh wow what a love scene between Hiei and Yusuke and I'm thinking it could
only get better between them.And adding Kurama will be even better.I can't wait for the next update.
Great job
only get better between them.And adding Kurama will be even better.I can't wait for the next update.
Great job
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was hawt!
I love seeing Hiei and Yusuke together. They fit in a weird way. It's hard for me to imagine Kurama and Yusuke, but I've seen some fics where it really works. I'm sure you can do it too!
I wonder how Mukuro will react to this. Ouch, ya know? Rejected and then finds out that her lust goes off for a MAN. I wonder what troubles Yusuke has that Hiei needs to help him.
Looking forward to it,
~MEme
I love seeing Hiei and Yusuke together. They fit in a weird way. It's hard for me to imagine Kurama and Yusuke, but I've seen some fics where it really works. I'm sure you can do it too!
I wonder how Mukuro will react to this. Ouch, ya know? Rejected and then finds out that her lust goes off for a MAN. I wonder what troubles Yusuke has that Hiei needs to help him.
Looking forward to it,
~MEme
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UNG. I really should review when I'm more coherent, but this was so good I'll try to make some sense.
The line that killed me dead was: his youki was thick enough to drown in. So many points for not only using the changes in youki, but also for giving Yusuke a Mazoku form and having Hiei broadcast through the Jagan. I love Jagan usage in a lemon.
You also managed to convey a lot of feeling and emotion in this chapter, and jeez - the lemon was smoking hot. I can't wait for another chapter!
The line that killed me dead was: his youki was thick enough to drown in. So many points for not only using the changes in youki, but also for giving Yusuke a Mazoku form and having Hiei broadcast through the Jagan. I love Jagan usage in a lemon.
You also managed to convey a lot of feeling and emotion in this chapter, and jeez - the lemon was smoking hot. I can't wait for another chapter!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Yusuke on the throne reading manga? I could see that perfectly. And I like how Hiei offered himself, and what Yusuke said in response. You have those two characterized very well, and keeping them in character - especially with lemons in the mix - is difficult.
I can't wait for the lemon.
I can't wait for the lemon.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I’m really enjoying your story. I like that you’re not afraid to use words like milquetoast and sanguine. I also like that you’re not rushing the plot to the detriment of the story. However, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter and death by anticipation is not pretty.