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for Hot Mazoku Action

by sefiru

person Hemamal
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are so mean!!! I loved Kurama's reaction at the start of the story. I thought the exact same thing.
person Frosty
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! Why did you stop right there??? YOU ARE EVIL!!!
Besides you being EVIL, I must say this is a great story and can't wait for you to update. ^_^
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, both Ryukotsusei and I were hanging out together when you posted chapter 7, and we both freaked out and had to read it immediately. We fell out of our chairs laughing about Hiei threatening to fuck himself with the hilt of his sword, and that line was repeated and giggled over for several days.

I loved chapter 7. It was hot and fun at the same time. I really want to know the full depth and meaning of Hiei's new title, and Yusuke is so uber-seme it makes me drool. The fight scene was marvelous.

Chapter 8 was awesome as well. That note - where Hiei says that Yusuke gives off divine energy in bed and Kurama has to grab tissues was hysterical. Also, the positions on the couch and how Yusuke and Hiei kiss made me sweat. Very nice.

And your notes at the end of each chapter crack me up. Spicy Kurama Manwich is like, the best kind of sandwich ever!
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, I can hardly wait! Just the damn letter alone had me cackling like a mad man in the middle of my school union. XD Kurama sure is in for it. Lucky bastard.
person lijana
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chapter was just filled with yumminess...I like the letter sent by Yusuke and Hiei ><

You are such a tease to keep us hanging like this!!

More Please!!! I love manwich!!
person Angela
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! *________* loved the little wager

::tilts head:: am i missing something? i get the feeling kurama got tricked into something, but can't figure out what...maybe i'm just not thinking in the right direction....

on another note......EVIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLL WOMAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNN how you torture us.
person Kerbear
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You meany,you cliff hangered us just when Kurama was getting nervous.I've got a feeling this is going to be
good.The next few chapters promise to be very juicy(I hope)As always you leave me on the edge of my seat for the next update. Great job
person kitkit
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nnnnnooooo how could you do this to me, again. you must update, update, update.
person amanda1
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww You ARE Evil, So darn evil. Update soon before I dislike you. Please?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person rayne
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh... you evil, evil writer!! dang! you just had to cut the story there, huh? xD

crap. I'll be waiting for the next update!!