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for Hot Mazoku Action

by sefiru

person hatorissexbitch
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for the next chapter!
person kitkit
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh nice chapter, but *sniff* no lemon...why did hokushin walk in, i wanted to read another lemon.
aaahhh i'm so happy for yusuke, i just hope everybody else who matters to him, will be happy that kurama, and hiei are his lovers.
person lijana
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it.

Is Kurama going back to school, really?

I am looking forward to everyone's reactions!!^^
person kerbear
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll bet the 3 of them together is going to cause quite a stir in all 3 worlds.It could be fun to see
Kurama tell Shiori about this and I sit here wondering if you'll let her recieve it well .She'd be something
else looking around the castle.Great job as always
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how that message will be perceived. XD And the cuddling was a nice touch. At least my little niece can't read. That'd cause problems later otherwise. lol Can't wait to read what happens next. XD
person Raholea
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hint at the lemon but not give details. cheater.
oh, yes... and lovely work on the snake, hiei... want to make mince-meat out of my own personal demons..?
Nah, didn't think so.... *sighs*

*takes note of foreshadowing*
i'll be waiting.. and doom on anyone that threatens the mighty toushin & clan... *evil cackles*
person Katonie
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You orrible mistress! No Smut?! What is the meaning of this???!!! A horrible let down, I assure you.
Other than that, the chapter rocked my socks off! Please update again soon.
Oh! also baked you some more cookies; here ya go *hands over scrumptous cookies*
Update again soon!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person MEme
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. The hot smut action can never go wrong, but I love the touchy feely moments best. I can't wait to see hwo Yomi and Mukuro will react this this news.

~MEme
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!! major cliff hanger!!

AWESOME!!!!!

waiting for next chapter!
person Asharra
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can anybody spell HOT?? Man, I just wished it wasn't so short!

Keep writing!!