schedule
December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So who's going to catch Sakura's intentions first,Kewa or one of the girls?Maybe Hiei's sister.This is a great start to what looks like an interresting story (chapter2).Its going to be fun watching Hiei accept help from everyone and boy can they mess with Sakuras mind if they want to.Poor Kurama caught in the middle,I hope you don't let him get to hurt,metal or otherwise.
Can't wait to see where you take this,great job so far (as always)
Can't wait to see where you take this,great job so far (as always)
schedule
December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
impressive! More hot steamy smex! Karasu's brother is so evil!
schedule
December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,now what?Poor Hiei is going to smell that fool on Kurama and what give up?(hope not)How will Kurama
let everyone know about him and his mother?Kurama and Hiei and a mind link don't they? being lovers and all.
This is going to get bloody but I wouldn't miss it for anything.I can't wait for sakura to learn just how protective the group is of each other.
let everyone know about him and his mother?Kurama and Hiei and a mind link don't they? being lovers and all.
This is going to get bloody but I wouldn't miss it for anything.I can't wait for sakura to learn just how protective the group is of each other.
schedule
December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please do NOT say that's the end!!! Oh Inari! NO! Hiei and Kurama belong together! I love the story, please keep it going! I look forward to the next update!
schedule
December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, what is Sakura hiding! If he hurts my fox he won't have to worry about Hiei killing him!!
schedule
December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I read your stories ALL the time but never review because I don't really feel like it most of the time but this one I will, you HAVE to update this and finish it! I love it and want to know more!
schedule
December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fight and Kurama as the prize? Ruh roh...that's not going to be a good attitude to have around our favorite fox. LOL!
schedule
December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiei has gone and done it this time. Silly fire demon, letting that sweet fox go! :-) Great story, Shiori!
schedule
December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
INTERESTING. Hiei sounds down and out at the moment, but I wonder if this Yoshi fellow is an enemy in the sense of a rival for Kurama's affections of an enemy in a larger sense too... Well, I'll wait around to find out, then.
schedule
December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if that's the end... I'm going to cry! that was incredibly sad! HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!