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for ENEMY AMONG US

by ShioriFoxiesMom

person Sandra
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that had me in tears (although I do cry easily). Hope you update this soon!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Those who represent themselves have fools for clients." Kurama did do well, but you never talk without a lawyer. Even Lawyers won't talk without a lawyer representing them.

Anyway, I really enjoyed that chapter. Sakura is a sado-masochistic bastard isn't he? I hope he gets his. I'm just not sure who I want to give it to him. Can't wait to read the next installment.
person kit
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!!!!!I BEG YOU!!!!!!you can not possibly allow that vile creature to hurt kurama!!!he was foolish,yes, but he doesn't deserve that fate!i was hyperventilating by the time i got to the last part!you won't do that to kurama, right?please?pretty please?pretty please with hiei-hugging-kurama on top?hope you update soon!real great cliff hanger!though i really hope you won't let anything bad happen to him. ;)
person satya maxwell
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good. i hope that you update it soon. I want to see what happens next.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that last little action by Kurama was just perfect. I am really getting into this story. I hope you can update soon. Thank you for taking time out of your holidays to write.
person kerbear
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my,your not really going to let Sakura take Kurama are you?And yes,I can't believe you left it there till
next time.Hiei and Yusuke are really going to hurt Sakura bad.I can't wait to see this.I know work beckons
but I hope you update soon.
Great job
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....roasted Sakura now? YAY!
person kerbear
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,Kurama in handcuffs,something I thought I'd never see in one of your stories.So glad Hiei didn't see that,
it was great to see his stepfather come to his support.Even better to see Kurama take some of this out on Sukura even in a small way.
You rock and I can't wait for the next update.I reallly hope its soon
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura is an evil, deceitful, mean little demon. I can't wait to see what you do to him.
person tickle
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi!your story is okay. definitely didn't expect sakura to be a very sick bastard intent on exacting revenge. the romantic plot between kurama and hiei also is great. the way they act around each other even before sakura was found out showed how much they care for each other. i'm glad kurama refused to bed sakura.and i'm hoping you won't allow sakura to be that intimate with kurama.that's just too much already. well, i guess you could say i'm biased against having any other character being that intimate with kurama other than hiei, even if it's rape.it means so much that he refused to be intimate with anyone so i really wish sakura will never have his wicked way with him.i know kurama and hiei and the whole team could pull through this together.good going.(",)