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for ENEMY AMONG US

by ShioriFoxiesMom

person Hemamal
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Kayla! Having two sexy guys coming into your office and manhandling you in one week is so unfair!!!!! I was nearly shocked out of my sit when I found out that Hiei was teaching human children martial arts and then nearly fainted when Hiei got home and found his sexy surprise. In short, this chapter was freakin' awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
person kerbear
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,that was a quick change of heart for Kurama.And is Hiei going to mark Kurama in return?
Great chapter though and I look forward to the next one!!It was awsome to see Yusuke help Hiei with
this as well.You rock
person jingko
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! You can't end it there! it's a really good story and I'm dieing for more!!!
person sonykit
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!!this chapter was just sooo sweet and sooo hot! this is a really good development in kurama and hiei's relationship. i love possessive-hiei and can't-resist-kurama. this chapter sheds light on very important matters like shiori's full acceptance of their relationship, kurama's doubts and hiei's determination. it's good to feel the emotions running high even in the midst of their passion. really good chapter. ;)
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins* If I didn't know better, I'd say the outfit might've had some help from a female. It'd be awesome to see Shiori planning this stuff with Hiei. I'm happy to see him fighting for Kurama. I think a new nickname is in order though, seeing how "Fox" did bring up some sore points at the beginning of this story.
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Hiei's in for it now! Hehe, I can't wait to see how this revenge plays out. That was incredibly hawt! I bet Kurama will never be able to sit through a conference at that table again without blushing. That was great. Please, please, please update again soon.
person kerbear
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,way to stake a claim.Thats one way for Hiei to make sure everyone knows Kurama is off limits.
Having his step father act like it was nothing was something else as well,Must be driving Kurama crazy that
everyone around him is ok with Hiei being there for him(in more ways than one)If he truely believes Hiei's
going to up and leave after all this(he better not)poor Hiei as a long way to go with him.
Glad your birthday was fun and dessert kicks ass if done right.Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hemamal
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what I call a great lunch!! Way to stake your claim Hiei!! ^o^
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I would have liked to be the secretary outside the conference room - I would've been pressed up against the glass! But that scene with Kurama on the table was hot hot hot. And I would have passed out as soon as I saw Hiei come out of the elevator - the tight black jeans, the leather jacket, and the dragon tattoo out? *swoons*
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the next time you guys want to have kinky make up sex, you should consider a motel room, because we could hear everything.

*sporfle* I cracked up when I read that. And your lemon was crazy hot. I kind of understand Kurama though - no matter what has happened (and a lot has happened - Kurama's been traumatized enough) - he can't easily forgive Hiei. Hiei needs to porve himself more than once for everything to be OK.