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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if anyone's told you, but Hiei's Dark Eye is called Jagan, not Jagon.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A little typo - it's seme not semi.
But anyway, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it. At times, I felt it was a little weird that Kurama called Hiei by pet names but of course that's only imho.
Also, you might need a little help with naming if you're going after Japanese names. Children are usually not named after districts in Japan.
But the story was really fun to read ^___^
But anyway, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it. At times, I felt it was a little weird that Kurama called Hiei by pet names but of course that's only imho.
Also, you might need a little help with naming if you're going after Japanese names. Children are usually not named after districts in Japan.
But the story was really fun to read ^___^
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like a lot of your stories. As usual, good job. I really like most of your work. The last few chapters seemed to be a different part of the story all together but that's okay. I thought that some of the drama and Shane were a nice addition, even if you make Hiei sound too mushy at parts. However, besides those mushy instances, you don't take the characters much beyond canon, which is nice. You make Kurama a bit over dramatic but it seems like he might be over dramatic in private. Anyway, again, great job. Your sex scenes are also getting better and better with each story so please write a new story soon. I love your stories and have read most of them. I know this is one of your older stories but I still like it. Keep writing please! I really enjoy your work. I hope I fed your muses for you. Also, it would be neat if you did a story/drabble of the intricate relationship Korunue and Hiei must have sharing one vessel. I know Hiei is the reincarnated version of Korunue but it still seems that they would annoy each other a whole lot.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg the parts with sakura made me feel like i was watching an episode of yu yu hakusho. as always u did a wonderful job.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude! I seriously just slapped my hand over my mouth when I relaized who Sakura was talking about! DAMN!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
man this is so sweet.
man this is so sweet.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome ending line! lol!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wha...wha...what??? kill hiei? what!?
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is a great story!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always I love your stories. I really liked the epilog and you could write an entire separate story of Shane's growing up and their life in the Makai after they move. I hope that you continue to post your stories, they are my pick me up whenever I'm down, I have read all of your stories posted on this site many times.