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by kle10

person NyteKit
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Love the wild monkey sex in the forest right before the storm started. And the crazed Kurama was so perfect for the challenge you answered. Also, I love how you made it fit in the actual storyline! What a great reason for Hiei to want to pull out Kurama's voice box! WOnderful job!

Oh, and this simile was one of the best ever: " like strips of the flesh of a wounded animal hanging lifelessly from the maw of a particularly hungry wolf. "
person Sir Psycho Sexy
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very VERY IC. Probably teh most IC Kurama/Hiei fanfic I've ever read.

If Togashi wrote this pairing, he'd do it like you did it.
person The Mal
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely fantastic and I enjoyed every word of it. It's not very often you find a good, hearty, in-character KuraHi that relates to the actual story of Yu Yu. I applaud you, my friend, and I demand more of this beauty from your godly fingertips. :)
person Hemamal
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome!! I never even thought of that scene that way! Sneaky Fox!! He can be so mean sometimes, but you still gotta love'em.
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was absolutely amazinggg. I loved it more than loved it. It was perfection. Thank you so much for writing this! I love how you played on the imagery, on the power within the storm. I don't know what else to say other than the sex scene was incredibly HOT. Your writing is powerful almost overwhelming, but in the same breath it hooks you and holds on tight. Thank you again so much for writing this I truely enjoyed reading it :)