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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. I think Kurama falling out of his chair was hysterically funny. And I really don't think that Hiei and Kurama are OOC. Hiei is very cold by nature, and Kurama is very calculating, you've written them well.
I hope there's more!
I hope there's more!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. A kind of new way of bringing the two demons together. Hiei does seem slightly OOC, though, but I guess that's to be expected with the plot and all. Nice job so far! Update soon!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow me love it im so glad you are writing the prequel to the series i love
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was a great start and I look forward to reading more. I look forward to finding out who
Hiei really wants Youko or Yususke.Or someone completely different.The lessons could be alot of fun between them ,hopfully Kurama dosent get hurt playing with such a partner.
Hiei really wants Youko or Yususke.Or someone completely different.The lessons could be alot of fun between them ,hopfully Kurama dosent get hurt playing with such a partner.