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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww that had to have been the sweetest vicious bite I've ever read. So cute!! I'm glad they managed to come to terms with each other even in the midst of all of those pregnancy hormones and social ineptitude. Yay!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFGawd! That had to be the most dramatic, hilarious, realistic-ish, and interesting story starring a Hiei/Botan Pairing that I've read yet. You could use a Beta Reader though...but other than that, keep on with the awesomness. ^-^
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, but you need to work on your spelling, and which words go where. Perhaps you need a beta whose specialty is grammar, spelling and punctuation.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was one of the best stories I've ever read in my life! (And I've read alot!) If you would like me to Beta a story (Fix the grammer and spelling mistakes) just send me them before posting, I'll fix them and send them back. I would be honored to do this. You are now oficially my favorite author.
-Kohaku
-Kohaku
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part two???? There has to be a part two. This was an awsome story, but I really want to know what happens to them after the baby comes, and- and- I don't really know what else,so please tell me there's a part two!! This was truely an awsome story!!