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by ShioriFoxiesMom

schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. THAT BITCH. damn thats really messed up. that was a mean twist. she could have let them finish first. then bust in. ur fans have been waiting a long time to see that. but damn erasing hiei's memories like that and kurama not saying anything to hiei. i wanted to smack him for that. im dying to find out what happens next. so please update soon like tomorrow or right now. like RIGHT NOW!!!
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurama. Makuro is such a bitch. I hope Hiei gets his memory back and does something equally mean to her... Maybe that's just my mean side showing though.

Anyway, I am waiting with bated breath for your next chapter.
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn ... I myself don't consider Mukuro that petty and shallow of a person, but if you must have an antagonist in your story you've made her an unlikeable enough one--though, as masochistic as Kurama might be, I doubt his comrades will allow this situation to go unremedied for long.
person Fox_Trot
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it and can not wait to see the next chapter. Please hurry and put it up. I love your stories and can't wait to see what you got next.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU END IT LIKE THAT. THAT WAS THE MEANEST THING YOU COULD DO. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I love the pet name for Hiei.
person TyChan
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, one of the best I've read in a while. I love how Kuwabara was a demon, and a tiger demon seems to fit him very well. I get so excited when I see that theres another chapter ^^ It makes my day
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chap (10). Such a wonderful place to stop and make us wait for ch. 11. Congrats on the puppy.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a fan for life right here! I am making it my goal to read all of your stories because your writing is so good. Thank You for writing. P.S. could you write another tragety (sp) for Kurama and Hiei? I need to cry some more.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My, but you did choose a terrible and terrific place to leave off, didn't you? =) Go figure they'd make better progress with the Yoko form--mayhaps soon Kurama will be more comfortable with the situation with Hiei, then?
person Fox_Trot
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I love it and so can't wait to see what happens next with both couples! Hurry up and put out the next chapter! Oh, and enjoy the puppy!