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by ShioriFoxiesMom

schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the assertive Kurama; the whiney, Mary Sue-ish Mukuro, not so much--do what you will with her, she's not the unadulterated Mukuro who I like ^-^
person lijana
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am happy to see Kurama fighting for his man!

About Mukuro I think a case of turn-about is fair-play might be in order. Hiei should use the Jagon to have Mukuro giving her approval for their mating. That would be poetic justice.

What ever you do will be good. I am looking froward to the next chapter! make-up sex!! ^__________^
person Hemamal
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Kurama finally got a back bone beaten into him! Hopefully this will work out the right way!!!
person Fox_Trot
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kill her! I am not a huge Mukuro fan so her death wouldn't hurt my feelings at all! This chapter is great though and I cannot wait to see the next.
person Kerbear
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It looked to be that Hiei is in charge even with her in the room.Swinging around up there that realization should be pointed out to her as well.To keep her as a friend or not though?mm,Maybe her not lieing about the memory thing would at least keep her alive to rework being friends with Hiei(under Kruamas watchfull eye)And her being lonely and wanting someone she could trust.Maybe Yusuke has someone in mind for her(haha)Than again,it might be time for a new lord/ruler.That would open up a new things to explore for both Kurama and Hiei with the castle getting used to a different attitude.Good luck in what ever you decide,I can't wait for the next chapter.
person TyChan
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH Why must you be so good I love this story I wait impatiently for the next chapter always
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippy and Yahoo another chapter read!! I am still hanging on your every word. I just wish more writers were as responsible as you with thier updates.
person lijana
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! They are taking two steps backwards rather than moving forward. What did that bionic bitch do to Hiei?

I have hope though that Hiei will come to his senses soon. Hopefully his Jagon will recover.

Oh the suspense is killing me. You are a wicked tease! ^________^
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Something really bad should happen to that cow of a robot woman! How dare she mess with my baby boy! Making him cry! I am still your #1 fan and I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hemamal
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thant is so fucked up!!!! Kurama finally accepts Hiei as his mate and Mukuro has to come and mess it up!!!!! I can't believe the twisted luck these two have! Kurama has to take Hiei back and the next chapter or I'm going to kick his and Mukuro's asses.