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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was short ,yes,but in no way disappointing.You write these two demons quit well and I always look forward to another chapter and story.Though I would've liked to have seen more on Hiei's fight with her,the love scene is going to be even better between Kurama and Hiei.(I look forward to that)
Great job
Great job
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, finally--here's to hoping no one ELSE interrupts them this time, eh?
And Kuwabara's comment about getting further on first dates than the entire time he'd been with Yusuke? XD Excellent.
And Kuwabara's comment about getting further on first dates than the entire time he'd been with Yusuke? XD Excellent.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!! So waiting for the next chapter. Liked the lemon between y and K but you know the one we are all waiting for. While waiting for your update I went back and reread a lot of your other stories. (I am preggo again, I got nothing but time) I just wanted to tell you that while I have always liked your writing, Your more recent stories show how far you have developed as a writer. You seem more comfortable with the lemons and express the different char. personalities so well. But I got off the point... Love the story, can't wait for the update.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah they're Hiei and Kurama are finally getting together and things are as they should be!! Update soon.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright HieixKurama loving time coming up. I can't wait!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please please write a full lemon for kurama and hiei. although the chapter was short, i really did enjoy reading it and i hope that you update soon.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am going to be honest and say that I let out a small cry of despair when I realized this fic wasn't done. I've been very much enjoying it. I especially enjoy how you've made the relationship between Yusuke and Kuwabara awkward and believeable. I cannot wait for an update. You have restored some of my interest in Yuyu hakusho fics. Thank you.
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. my heart was in my throught when hiei lost his memeries and was going to mate that bitch. please dont let her get between them again better yet kill her she deserves it. i know that writing can be hard with writers blocks and such, but can you up data soon i want to know what will happen to her (death hopefully hehe)
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter may have been short, but it was definitely worth the wait. As far as ideas, how was Mukuro even able to alter Hiei's memory since he has the Jagon? Could Hiei let the Jagon out more than normal and allow it to restore his memory or will they just move forward with Hiei not remembering? Maybe Hiei should just take over for Mukuro now. Oh and don't forget Yusuke and Kuwabara they have to mate at some pointe. Hope this helps some, I truly love your stories.
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY Kurama and Hiei!!! It's about time Kurama got a backbone. I am so glad someone finally knocked some sense into him. I can't wait to read your next chapter.