rate_review Reviews

Love your stories, this is a different twist on Yusuke's heat cycle. Hope you continue this one.

O___o; holy shit. *nosebleed*
write the next chapter!!! *runs for tissues*

THERE ARE ONLY GOING TO BE 2 CHAPTERS? T-T

This is going tobe more than a one shot right?

I take back my question about the one shot. HOLY SHIT! Passes out from to many happy thoughts. LOL.

And you say the hot one's gonna be chapter 2? Maaaaaan, I can't wait! So good...

Dat one bang up job you did there. Keep it up and I will keep reading.

-blood spurts violently from nose- OMG! That was so hot!

Damn! Were is my seme when I need him!?

-runs of to find him-

Heheheheheh. I still laugh my ass off every time Jin says: "That be the one!" Like I said, you really nailed Jin's accent. Some people mangle it, but you wrote it awesome. And props for even including Jin, he's sexay as hell and doesn't really appear in fanfic. You really hit his character dead on. Also: "I’ll be bettin’ ya once he gets him a taste a dick, he won’t be chasin’ dat girl’s pussy no more," is fucking classic.

Christ, I beta'd this and I still am in motor-breaking mood when I read it over. The position, and the mild Hiei/Youko fanservice makes me sweat. I love how Mazoku are bottoms, and how Yusuke is dilated and self-lubricating. Finally, the self-lubricating uke ass is a reality! But dude...Youko's cock scares me. Poor thing, he never had a chance to really fuck a mate without hurting them until Yusuke came along. See, this story has a positive message: embrace your demon heat - you'll do all your friend's a favour!

Snicker.

But really, what else can I say? You took a hashed, overused plot device and breathed new life into it. You wrote it the way it should be written: great characterization and mad hot smexing. A foursome. You fucking rule!

Y'know, woman...I'm sure you know...that...that...so hot...brain...all melty. *splat on the floor* You're the one who writes teh_PR0N! Seriously...damn.