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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would really love to read the rest of the story please update
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i stumbled across this from an authoress' page.........*blood dripping* OK.......
simply divine and then some!
would you be concidering to put up the next chapter?
miko ~_^
simply divine and then some!
would you be concidering to put up the next chapter?
miko ~_^
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot I can't even begin to describe how good it was! First time I read a foursome that was written this good and not to mention successful. Heh I would love to read the rest and I want to read the look on that bitch's face when she not only realizes Yusuke was telling the truth but in losing her he gained 3 serious hotter than hell/sexier than sin mates who can please him in every way. Hee this is great, I'll be awaiting the next chapter!
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I want more! That was damn hot!!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this story? It's really good and I want to see what happens next! Come on, review!!! you know you want to ;)
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delightfully dirty. Your writing is the porn equivalent of devil's-food cake.
You got the guys pretty much IC. I was a little worried that you were going to bash Keiko, but then you put in something from her point of view.
You got the guys pretty much IC. I was a little worried that you were going to bash Keiko, but then you put in something from her point of view.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a wonderful story. I hope that you will update this fic soon, I hate to see it as one of the many forgotten fics on this site.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY PLEAS UPDATE
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aboslutly amaing pleas email me at Princesssdragon@aol when you update
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: So Hot! Is been forever since I read this, so of-course I had to reread it again. (Everything’s better the second time around... or the third...or the fourth...XD.lol) I love this story and can't wait till the 2nd chapter. (There will be more right? Please?!) One of the things that stands out the most in this story is both the completive and dominate personalities of all the characters. I enjoy how even though Yusuke’s the bottom he’s still as commanding/strong as ever. (I love Yusuke as bottom but don’t think a submissive Yusuke is in his nature.)
But my favorite part in the whole thing is that everyone was able to be Yusuke’s first in some way. Whither it was being fucked, fucking someone or giving oral they were all his first in one way or another. And the way you put it together was nicely done- getting everyone’s POV while keeping the action moving. (Must have been hard at times.)
Anyway I loved it and can’t wait to read more. ^_^ I hope you continue this. (All give you cookies if you continue to give me smut! XD lol.) Bye for now.
But my favorite part in the whole thing is that everyone was able to be Yusuke’s first in some way. Whither it was being fucked, fucking someone or giving oral they were all his first in one way or another. And the way you put it together was nicely done- getting everyone’s POV while keeping the action moving. (Must have been hard at times.)
Anyway I loved it and can’t wait to read more. ^_^ I hope you continue this. (All give you cookies if you continue to give me smut! XD lol.) Bye for now.