rate_review Reviews

So, when do Yusuke and Koenma get together. that's what I want to see. Please update soon.

So awesome! Can't wait for next chappie

please update

I love the little jealousy thing that Karasu is showing. I don't think he likes the idea that Yusuke might get to experience what his little toy feels like before he does lol Something tells me he better move fast unless he wants to miss his chance, I'm betting Hiei's going to continue being curious and wanting to experiement.

Kurama ogling Sakyo was good, leave it to Yusuke to point it out in a voice loud enough that the man overhears *snickers* looks like his plan to embarrass Kurama failed though lol He really is starting to sound like the jealous boyfriend.

Keep up the good work.

"And Karasu proves to be tempting..." Curious. UPDATE SOON!!!

Ooooooooh I really would have loved to see Kurama riding Yusuke for two hours, lol. The visual alone melts my brain. I haven't figured out yet if Karasu is going to be a great fuck for Hiei or Hiei's worst nightmare, but I can't wait to find out. And the flirting between Sakyo and Kurama is so cute. Hahaha, Kurama staring at Sakyo's dick while he's pissing. That's too funny. Hey, bitch! When am I going to get my Yusuke/Koenma fuck scene, hmmmmmm *tapping foot** Do not displease your Mistress. Only bad things will happen if you do that. ^_^

I gotta say that Yusuke surprised me here by taking that hit for Koenma. I half expected him to just watch and then laugh at the guy with the animosity going between them lol

I love the way Hiei's curiosity got the better of him too. Going to Yusuke was probably the best thing that he could have done, though I have to say I'm gonna smack him for not seeing to Yusuke's needs. He could have at least offered him a handjob instead of leaving him to his own devices, the selfish bastard lol

Good work

Not bad, even though you've paired Hiei and Karasu up.

Yay for more Yusuke sex. YOu're killing me here! That was really hot and sexy. I just felt sorry for Yusuke having been left hanging. I could have taken care of him. ^_^ Ohhhhh, I wonder what Karasu has in store for Hiei now. That's gonna be hot! Looking forward to more.

Love ya
Your Mistress

Now that was a lovely surprise, nothing like a little Yusuke/Hiei action to make my day. And I like the slow way you're approaching the Yusuke/Koenma; it does take time for them to go from hating to fucking.

And you're killing me with the Karasu/Hiei. THEM. FUCKING. NOW. I WANT TO SEE IT.