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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. You have provided a very interesting and believable background to the Shinobis, especially our beloved Jin.
Your writing is as clean and crisp as usual ( although I only registered, I have read most of your stuff here), and that makes a smooth, pleasant read. Your sense of humor has not surfaced too much yet, unlike in "Once burned" which had me burst out laughing so many times, but given that it is Jin you are writing about, I am sure it will eventually, regardless of the seriousness of the story. Please continue.
Your writing is as clean and crisp as usual ( although I only registered, I have read most of your stuff here), and that makes a smooth, pleasant read. Your sense of humor has not surfaced too much yet, unlike in "Once burned" which had me burst out laughing so many times, but given that it is Jin you are writing about, I am sure it will eventually, regardless of the seriousness of the story. Please continue.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm ... the origins of the Shinobi, well, as we know them in the series at least--intriguing ^__^