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Oh, I hate your Kurama and I thought I made mine a bastard, yours takes the cake dear. I don't think he should die, should be chained up and forced to watch Hiei fucking Yusuke over and over and over again! And if he touchs one strand on Yusuke's head I'll have Aoshi hunt him down and skin him alive, then plaster honey on his open sections, douse him with ants, cut his pecker off, feed it to Elder Tuguro. After he's a pussed up yellow balloon from all the swollen ant bites. I'm going to take Hiei's sword and pop him. POP! Like an annoying zit. And he should have slapped Keiko, only part I was disappointed with. Sorry, why I don't see her and Yusuke as a couple. She acts like his mother, abusing him at that. I want her to get her another man and first time she decks him I hope he turns around and bitch slaps her harping ass to da FLOOR! *snaps fingers* Now, where was I? Oh yeah, this is looking great. Love it, keep up the good work. Now time for me to go pick up my own bitch from work. Got to get there on time or she's grouchy. Not like she works hard but she does look sexy in that uniform. Much love!

I love this story, I truly do -- even if Kurama is being a Class A One Bastard, due in large part to his Youko nature. And I have to admit, I really honestly hate him and his treatment of not only Yusuke but the others, mainly because I think he's totally neglecting his humanity as 'Kurama' in favor of the selfish, self-centered Youko. I wonder, too, if he even realizes this and to what end it will all lead.

Oh my, I think my brain just smelted that is so fucking HOT! I've always prefered Kurama when he's dominant and sadistic and you have managed both excellent and it's always a pleasure seeing that cocky, loud mouthed detective where he belongs, as somebodys bitch. Is it just me or is Hiei slowly dissapering from Yusukes mind and is Kurama getting a bit too possessive of his 'toy'? Anyway, this is definitely one of my favourites, when I started reading it this morning I was so engrossed that I was late for work, try explaning that>.<

This is so cool.I know I should've reviewed each chapter but I just had to find out what was going to happen,and all I can say is wow it leaves me hot and wanting more.Though through all this I wonder how Yusuke will be able to leave Kurama/Youko it seems they are forming a link between them that niether one may be able to ignore.It may have started out for Hiei but seems to be staying with Kurama(not that thats a bad thing)they make a great master/slave couple.You write very well and I look forward to the next chapters.

This is very well written so far and I look forward to the next chapter very much.Its a new lite to see Yusuke in.Its seems to that he may end up staying with Kurama being he slave or not.Yusuke is starting to have feelings for his fox master.I hope you update soon

Please send me an email when you update this story. I look forward to seeing if Yusuke gets Hiei.

"But that's only part of it. What else have you done to warrant this sort of attention from me? Omitting transgressions will not lessen your punishment.” Fuck! that is so Kurama to the letter. You know, you keep telling me how hard it is to write Kurama, but you keep him in character more than anyone! So cut yourself some slack, K ^_^

I love how you go from Kurama being tender with Yusuke after the bathroom talk to the evening where he gets his dick pierced, lol. Poor Yusuke is kept guessing all the time. It was so great bringing Youko out to play, especially in front of Fudo, hahahahaha. I guess Youko has to show them all just who Yusuke belongs to. And how Yusuke loves the pain. I always thought Yusuke had to be a masochist with all the punches and abuse his body takes during a fight, only to go back for more. That was a very astute obversation on your part, as well as Youko's, LOL

Loving this story so much!

Oh my GOD! I so should have read this sooner. I was unable to sleep last night because I started it then and finished with chap 3 today. I can't wait to see what happens next. The way you write Kurama is exactly how I see him, by the way. Don't change a thing about his persona. Thank you, thank you, thank you! for writing this.

Yusuke has a pain fetish and Youko's come to play.... I don't think it gets ANY better than this!

Though I have to say, I do like that you still have Kurama's human aspect somewhat understanding of what's happening with Yusuke because I really do like seeing Kurama that way... always have and always will... it's what makes him that much more real to me!

That was SO DAMNED HOT and IC. There were a few purple prose problems, but nothing major. Good job!