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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like I said to you before, the part where my heart broke was when Yusuke cried out for Hiei and Kurama heard that and belittled him for it. Wonderful work right there.
You know what I like best about your writing? I mean, besides the fact that you don't hold back? Your plot ideas. I would have never thought of Youko sealing in Yusuke's ki like that, as well as the miko-blessed manacles, and the carpet-poison. That's fucking brilliance right there. And your tender moments between Yusuke and Koenma were so sweet. I hope Koenma calls Hiei and tells him about what Kurama is doing. I really do.
The lines that killed me were: The day had been one of the most taxing ones that he could remember and it felt like he'd been through hell and back before stopping to take the tour again.
and but for Kurama to take a slave temporarily? It just wasn't in the man's nature. He used them until he tired of them and generally they were slaughtered afterwards. Beautiful.
And I bow before you for the real brutal non-con. It was delicious, thank you so much for writing it vividly, disturbingly, and well.
*bends over*
You know what I like best about your writing? I mean, besides the fact that you don't hold back? Your plot ideas. I would have never thought of Youko sealing in Yusuke's ki like that, as well as the miko-blessed manacles, and the carpet-poison. That's fucking brilliance right there. And your tender moments between Yusuke and Koenma were so sweet. I hope Koenma calls Hiei and tells him about what Kurama is doing. I really do.
The lines that killed me were: The day had been one of the most taxing ones that he could remember and it felt like he'd been through hell and back before stopping to take the tour again.
and but for Kurama to take a slave temporarily? It just wasn't in the man's nature. He used them until he tired of them and generally they were slaughtered afterwards. Beautiful.
And I bow before you for the real brutal non-con. It was delicious, thank you so much for writing it vividly, disturbingly, and well.
*bends over*
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're horrible! How could you do that to my Yusuke? No cookies for you, you big meanie. Just for that I think someone needs to have Hiei ass raped and beaten with a tire iron! Oh the words fail me, so cruel. You lucky I love you or you be fired. Better make Hiei give him some good lubbins. He's going to need it after all that. He'll just have to come cuddle with me. I can't wait till Hiei gets ahold of him. Better update soon.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck............................................dude thats so messed up. looking foward to your next update.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhhh, Kurama is such a bastard! My poor Yusuke. Kurama has certainly lost his mind. His arrogance would almost be funny if it wasn't pushing his darkest side to the forefront, allowing his egotistical entitlement issues to take on a whole new level. He really believes his own bullshit. How vain he is. But then Kurama always did have that personality, he was just able to hide it from everyone. He is a master manipulator after all.
This has just gotten so dark, but everytime I read it I get sucked into the web you've weaved around the characters. You've brought Kurama's dark side out in such a believable way, not to mention how and why Yusuke would put up with such extreme measures to get Hiei. Every aspect of this story has been expertly plotted and flows through the sequence of events effortlessly. That is so hard to do when weaving a story of this nature. Now that the fic has taken an even darker turn, I can't wait to see where it all ends up, even though I already know, lol. It's just so much fun reading it again when posted. It's almost like reading it for the first time.
As always my hats off to my fav writer. I love you so much my little uke.
Your Loving Mistress
This has just gotten so dark, but everytime I read it I get sucked into the web you've weaved around the characters. You've brought Kurama's dark side out in such a believable way, not to mention how and why Yusuke would put up with such extreme measures to get Hiei. Every aspect of this story has been expertly plotted and flows through the sequence of events effortlessly. That is so hard to do when weaving a story of this nature. Now that the fic has taken an even darker turn, I can't wait to see where it all ends up, even though I already know, lol. It's just so much fun reading it again when posted. It's almost like reading it for the first time.
As always my hats off to my fav writer. I love you so much my little uke.
Your Loving Mistress
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5! Wow!You have to wonder what Hiei would think of Kurama now after doing what he's done to poor Yusuke.My fingers are crossed for Yusuke,he still has much to endure I think.Yusuke is very tough but this could push serveral limits .I wait on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.I hope its soon because I'm going to fall off.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! I don't know what to say after reading this. I truly didn't think it could get any worse for Yusuke, but this chapter definitely convinced me otherwise.
Even now, though, I can't say that I hate Kurama. I know that his motives are pure Youko and that even though he claims to feel no guilt over what he's doing, somewhere inside, he does -- even if he doesn't know it himself.
And just for the record -- I think Koenma is a putz! It's easy to hate someone and put all the blame on them for being 'blackmailed' but if he was god enough to have a relationship and father a child, he should be god enough to accept the responsiblity that goes along with it. Instead, he wallows in self-pity.
Even now, though, I can't say that I hate Kurama. I know that his motives are pure Youko and that even though he claims to feel no guilt over what he's doing, somewhere inside, he does -- even if he doesn't know it himself.
And just for the record -- I think Koenma is a putz! It's easy to hate someone and put all the blame on them for being 'blackmailed' but if he was god enough to have a relationship and father a child, he should be god enough to accept the responsiblity that goes along with it. Instead, he wallows in self-pity.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally got finished reading this thing. I've noticed that there is only a few authors actually give decent amount of detail. Most like to just slap some dialogue down and pretend they are doing something. I can see you are going to make this thing take a dramatic turn. But you did give the appropriate tagged warnings so I can't bitch. I actually take my hat off to you. Most people are afraid to take things to a darker side, if they do then they have it unrealistic. Kurama does have a darker side that is hidden and you have done wonders to bring it out. I doubt I'll review again, I usually don't unless I have something important I think needs to be said. Also your knowledge of Yaoi is much appreciated. Hate opening up a fic that has them fucking like a male and a female. My only complaint is how easy Yusuke accepts things but you tried to explain why so I'll live with that. I look forward to see how you shall end this one.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,whatb a chapter.But not a surprise that Youko went to far with Yusuke.What now though snd will Yusuke see anyone he knows on the walk?Wonder what Hiei would do if he found out about whats going on with them(would he even care)I can't wait for the next chapter,I love every minute of this and can't wait to see what happens next
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is just better and better each time I read it. I so fucking hate Kurama in this, he's such a bastard. He is giving obssessive/possessive a new definition, lol. It's so deliciously evil. My poor Yusuke once again is too trusting by giving Kurama more time to plan. I'm soooooo scawwwwrd. Kurama is giving me the willies.
The threesome was hot. I always new Koenma was a perv, lol and even though Kurama is blackmailing him, Koenma wouldn't be in this mess if he wasn't a perv in the first place. I'm so nervous to read the next chapter. It's gonna be harsh on my boi. I can't wait!
Talk to you tonight
Your Loving Mistress
The threesome was hot. I always new Koenma was a perv, lol and even though Kurama is blackmailing him, Koenma wouldn't be in this mess if he wasn't a perv in the first place. I'm so nervous to read the next chapter. It's gonna be harsh on my boi. I can't wait!
Talk to you tonight
Your Loving Mistress
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And right now is where it begins to get ugly. I know you said character death in this, but I'm wondering who is going to die. Kurama? because he finally goes too far, Hiei? because Kurama can't control his jealously, or Yusuke? for the same reasons - possession. I can't tell you how fucking happy I was to see that you posted another chapter of this. This, by far, is my favourite story from you. And you're really taking it to new levels with every single chapter.
The scene with Botan was disturbing. As was the scene with Koenma. And when Yusuke said his safe word and Youko basically dismissed it, my heart was in my chest. EMOD just came out to ask me how the chapter was (because I screamed like a freakjob and then told him to find something to do when I saw you posted it), and I just kind of blinked at him and said - it was great, but very scary. I can't wait to see more.
LOVE AND KINK FOR YOU.
The scene with Botan was disturbing. As was the scene with Koenma. And when Yusuke said his safe word and Youko basically dismissed it, my heart was in my chest. EMOD just came out to ask me how the chapter was (because I screamed like a freakjob and then told him to find something to do when I saw you posted it), and I just kind of blinked at him and said - it was great, but very scary. I can't wait to see more.
LOVE AND KINK FOR YOU.