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I hate myspace! I really do.. But after wondering why you suddenly stopped updating at your normal pace I grew curious and checked it out.

I read about your condition. At first it sounded like Bell's Palsy but I think that only paralyses one side of your face.. It shouldn't affect your hands.

I just want you to know that that your health is more important than updates. Can't believe I'm saying that, I've been dying for a chapter 8, but I'd rather your problem go away.

Get well.. Soon!

OMG, I'm reading this like a horror novel. It's disturbing how each time I get upset but I can't quit because I hope Yusuke's going to have his sweet revenge. I just hope they aren't going to have a romantic ending of some sort, that would have been totally unbelievable.

KowaiiAngel

This story is a-freakin-mazing!!!! Oh my God! At first I was wary to read it because of how it started off, but once I did, I became enraptured. It's too good to not read the end of. It's like a really good novel you never want to put down! Truly, as brutal as the happenings, this plot is too great to ignore!! You must update soon! I have to know if Keiko's okay! Gahhhhhh!!!!!

Please don't listen to that idiot anon. What you did was great. Its not like they'd all be buddies for life anyway. Not after Yusuke's demon heritage popped. Kuwabara would age and die and they wouldn't.

I love that you brought out Kurama's sadistic side. Everyone seems to paint him as this girly fluffy little slut for their stories. They seem to forget that Kurama, Yoko in particular, wasn't someone to mess with. Inside that pretty little head lies the mind of a cold hearted killer. Yeah.. sure he says Yoko won't come back.. but in fanfiction you can wake up the sexy bastard.

The only part I didn't like was Botan coming on to Yusuke. Eww.. But it was worth the discomfort to see the psychotic Kurama afterwards. And though i love the dark Kurama you've given us, I can't wait to see more between Hiei and Yusuke, which is my favorite pairing.

u sick! Not sure if i should applaud you or suggest you get mental help. i cant believe people love this crap. you ruined their friendship, absurd. u gotto be a man cause u have no style. plain torture to awe the readers, where is the actual plot in this. is none, just kurama fucking him over and acting stupid. and the sex is horrid. try harder.

And obviously Anon loves the sweet Mary-Sue stories where no one gets hurt and everyone is fluffy. Nice job coward, how about leaving your name and some real concrit next time instead of just flailing like an idiot?

No...you try harder. And grammar is your friend, as well as capitalization. You might want to look into that.

Wow,chapter 7 is a seat edger for sure.I moved and haven't been able to get back on here to see any updates,what a great surprise to find this one.And wow,what is going to happen now?Hiei isn't a stupid demon and may know what Kurama would do but would he take steps to help pervent it?.I can't wait for the next chapter,gd I hope its soon.Great job
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please update soon

HOW THE FUCK DID I FORGET TO REVIEW THIS? *hangs head in shame*

Things that ruled in this chapter:
-Youko losing a piece of ear. That had to hurt.
-Koenma finally having some balls.
-Hiei darting around the whip and coming in close. You had the way he fought down.
-Mukuro reaching into Yusuke's mind and being reminded of her childhood.
-Mukuro informing Hiei that there's no half-assing Yusuke's recovery.
-The whole scene between Hiei and Yusuke. The position Yusuke was in when Hiei came upon him in the wasteland. That whole scene was tender without being OOC, and you gave enough physical displays of affection without belittling what Yusuke has gone through.
-Youko picking up a street whore and faking his death. Just...gyah. The poor guy, he had no chance at all.

LOVE. FOR YOU. MOAR PLEASE.

love the story its so dark and orignal