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for Under The Influence

by ryukotsusei

person kitkit
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that's one way to deal with the inlaws. Can't believe they did that but can't blame them for giving in. They lucky someone from Kuwa's side didn't see them. Or they might have called the cops on Yusuke for being a pedaphile. Mwhahahaha, I love seeing Hiei being the one taking it up the ass. He's so little and cuddly so he makes a nice uke when it's believable. I want to see you do a Hiei/Karasu chika! I'm sure I'm not the only one alone here, that would be a hawt bloody fuckfest! Keep up the good work! Love ya!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fricking hot stuff right there. you never cease to amaze me with the ...... awww hell. who am i kidding?! i can barely put 2 words together, let alone a well thought out review after reading that! awesome work. always eager to read more of this pairing by you. looking foward to your next fic!
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bitch. You almost made me late to a very important meeting because I have no ability to resist your lemons. And then I had to sit in the meeting for two hours when all I could think of was: YUSUKE...HIEI...BALCONY...COCK RING....DSJAGKDGKAGDKGAKLHLHSLH.

What was good about this? The slightly drunk Hiei, the dirty talk:"One of these days...you're going to have to tell me just where the hell you became so good at sucking cock.", the fact that Hiei learned that from Kurama HAHAHAHAH, the rimming, the cock ring, and the fact that pretty much everyone saw them FUCKING ON THE BALCONY - CAN I GET A HELL YEAH!. This was the first fic in ahile that made me laugh out loud like a crazy person.

Tapping...you...so...soon.
person KyoHana
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see your motivation has returned... and what a WAY to return!! I LOVED reading this and I'm happy that you gave the H/K pairing a nod in the story. Who else but the amorous fox would have taught Hiei how to use his tongue and mouth so effectively, ne?!?
person hColleen
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot...and sweet...Nice...and now I go off to try and think...if I can find my brain...
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Great story! Definitely left it open for a sequel. I've become a fan of yours and truly hope to see the rest of your stories finished as well as new ones shared for all of us to drool and smile over.
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Totally hot and sexxay. Yay for Yusuke giving it to Hiei good and hard. Uke Hiei is too damn hot. Yusuke taking Hiei against the balcony railing at a party where people can see you if they look up **drool, pant, cream** I haven't been able to get that visual out of my head all day. And thank you for something decent to read that's new. You definitely deserve plenty of hugs and kisses. ^_^