rate_review Reviews

That was hot as hell! I've spent the entire afternoon reading both chapters, sheesh, and I though I write long chappies. Well it was well worth it. You had me glued to the sceene until the end. I never would have paired those two together, but in the AU world it worked out great. Very angsty and the sex was totally hot. Who wouldn't get all worked up spanking Hiei's cute little bubble butt ^_^

I'm really looking forward to the Kurama/Yusuke chappie.

Love ya
KHL

This second chapter was completely made of win. Not only was it nice and long, you had five incredible lemons in it, a heaping dose of angst, violence, and even attempted suicide! LOVED IT!!!!!!

*applause*

I don't know what you were talking about when you said you couldn't write yaoi lemons well, because all five lemons were incredible. You manage to convey Hiei's innocence and sensuality well, and you executed his sexual learning curve in a beleivable way. Every lemon was different and crazy, and you do dirty talk really well too, and I love dirty talk in my lemons. I also love how crazy dirty this is because of the stepson-stepdad factor. And then you threw in that car accident, and all that angst sjdgksgfksjfljshlhfl I can't stop thinking about this story.

When you post the Yusuke/Kurama lemon I'm gonna need earlpugs to keep in my brain.

You know, I don't know anything about Kenshin, and I rearely read crossovers, but I like this one. The lemon at the end was vivid and really hot, I liked the Stepfather/Hiei thing, and the dirty talk made my brain melt. Well done.

Holy shit lol Saitou definitely put Hiei in his place didn't he. I'm curious to see how Hiei is going to take him disappearing like that and what's going to happen. I'm not sure that he'd tell anyone but Saitou leaving like this is definitely going to leave a bad impression. Can't wait to read the second half.

holy fathermucker... that was hot!

oh my god, I want more. :P