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for The Destiny Of Men

by LadyShinomori

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled with the Yusuke fuck scenes, lol. And I'm with BlueUtopiah, GO, KURAMA, GO! Ride that hot boy while he's blindfolded and handcuffed. What better way to have Yusuke, lol. And the tent scene was so hawttttttt! It gave me chills and left me dripping. I loved the whole story behind them hooking up. You really are the Queen of misunderstandings ^_^ And I liked how you worked in Saitou and Hiei. That was a nice touch. I can only imagine what the evenings are going to be like after Yusuke moves in with Kurama at Saitou and Hiei's house. My brain's on overload. Thank you so much!
person sc
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That was possibly the worst fanfic I've ever read. Way to fail horribly.
person Tifa2000
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good, don't like Hiei with anyone but Kuwabara, yet the relationship with Saitou was a nice setup! And Kurama and Yusuke are perfect for each other. Can you write a Hiei and Kuwabara fic, that's what I want to see. I think there is a reason why they fight all the time. Hiei riding his big stallion would be hot. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG That last lemon on the Kurama/Yusuke was very hawt! Yes, please do write a Hiei/Kurama and also a Yusuke/Koenma
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just want to thank you for a lovely conclusion to a pairing I'd never seen before. I love the way you brought Saitou and Hiei back together, patching things up between them. The lemons were hot as well, definitely an extra treat for us. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing what other interesting pairings you come up with.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice continuance from the Yusuke/Kurama side of it. Leave it to Yusuke to screw things up so badly that Saitou needs to step in and tell him how to fix it. I definitely like how your willing to do the more unusual pairings outside of the normal Kurama/Hiei range. While Yusuke/Kurama isn't exactly rare it isn't overwhelming the fandom either. And I still say the Hiei/Saitou was awesome.

I'm not sure if you're looking for other pairings to write but I have a list of those I'd love to see someone tackle. Yusuke/Soubi(Loveless), Hiei/Akabane(GetBackers), Hiei/Naraku, Yusuke/Sniper, Yusuke/Saitou, Hiei/Karasu, Ban(GetBackers)/Kurama, Yusuke/Kazuki(GetBackers). There's tons of others if you ever want to have a pairing tossed your direction. Just let me know. Great job sweets, I'll catch you later on yahoo :D
person Trish
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was sweet! If you watch GB can you do a Hiei/Ginji pls. I'd love to see a canon pairing of that one. The Hiei/Saitou was really good too.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As soon as Kurama went into the bathroom and Keiko and Yusuke walked in, I was like: GO, KURAMA, GO! That whole sex scene was friggin' hot. And I really really loved how you kept putting Hiei and Saitou in the story, and that they were crazy horndogs. I really llike that pairing.

But man, you cut Kurama's hair! *weeps* But Yusuke didn't mind. You know, the entire story of how they eventually got together - with misunderstandings and miscommunications, and the amount of time that passed before they could both get their act together and realize that they were in love with each other - I liked that a lot. It makes an even better lemon when there's a good plot behind it. And the final lemon? BUH - NONCOHERENT RIGHT NOW TRY AGAIN LATER. I'm sure Hiei and Saitou were giggling in their tent the entire time.

Loved it. Huzzah.
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was naughty i liked it
person Jellyjane
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Never thought of Saitou as being that way but nicely done. More spankings please! Can't wait to read the Yusuke/Kurama but can you write a Hiei/Kurama?