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for Growth of a Spirit Detective

by azalea

person kitkit
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh the story is getting good
person Hemamal
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He forgot. He forgot! How can you forget sleeping with 2 of the 4 sexiest demons in all three worlds!!!Four meaning: Kurama, Youko Kurama, Hiei and Yomi. Yes, Yomi. A Lot of people may not like him personally but his voice and confidence are killer sexy!!!
person amanda1
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Good job. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the update.
person Raholea
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bounces up and down waving pocky in one hand and tissue in the other*
yummy, all of that either yummy or adrenaline rush and damn, but i want more!! i will have to keep and eye on this one. i wanna know what yusuke does about being claimed/ bonded whatever, cause i think it's gonna get really interesting, really fast!
and i wanna know what just happened to the two last demons.... did yusuke's demon side just rip them a new one or what??? more, please more!!! and the evil kitty needs to die!!!!!!! *dances on bloody kitty*
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dagnabit! A cliffy. Hmm I hope you update soon, because I just have to know what happened just now. Nice fight scenes.

There were some typos and at one point when he is still drugged Youmi saw something out of the corner of his blind eyes, but otherwise great chapter. :)
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is what I call a chapter!!! This just made my day. I love how true to themselves ur able to write my favorite guys each time u write a chapter. Let me say I can see Hiei reacting just like that in the show in that fight if it happened lol. I dont think i can really put into words how incredible this story is... U must be one of the best writers on this whole site. Uve got me on pins and needles wanting to know what our little detective is going to do now. Hot sex, deep bonds, angst, and all done with my fave guys.... What more could I ask for in heaven? A happy ending maybe? Thats about all I can think of. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! ((Bows down while showering the great writer with many many cookies!!!!))
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa! I'm so glad they got out of that little jam. And the use of those drugs, nice. Damn, I love this fic. XD I can't wait to read the next chapter. Things just keep getting better and better. ^o^
person amanda1
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please update soon. It's a nice story so far.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.m.g....... that was frickin' intense in horrifyingly-cant-help-but-read-more-even-though-i'm-squicked-out kind of way. shit, this is all imma be able to think about for a while. wow. the boys better get some major payback on these guys in the near future. looking foward to the next update.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, This is a very well written story. I am enjoying it immensely. There are a few typos, but not too many. I can't wait to read more.