rate_review Reviews

I think that your OC's are really interesting, and that you have a knack for writing this sort of thing.

Keep going!

How could you leave it off at that cliffy? not fair. I don't think you updated in a while too.... please update soon. its like people are starting to forget about this site. :( besides, this is a great story. please tell me if you either forgotten about it or maybe discontinued it. either way, an authors note chapter would be nice.

This story is just as beautiful and entrancing as the first time I laid eyes on it, and I am very happy that I have found it again after so long. Keep up the wonderfu work.

Brilliant! Still one of the best I've ever read. The cut-off of that last chapter left me with such a deep sensation of surprise (at the fact that it was the last chapter) that it was a physical sensation. It was beautiful.

CRAP! This gets better and better with each passing chapter. I like how you write your OC's. And the sex scenes are smoking! Go you!

this story is awesome! i just finished the last chappie you did. ~.^ keep up the good work!

Wow. This chapter was so long it could have stood as a story by itself. The fight scenes were glorious, and I could tell how much thought you put into the drug, and how the drug was dispersed. Kudos for including the brother/sister team, I liked Natsumi's character in the show and she doesn't get used at all in fanfic.

Again, I adore Kurama and Hiei's bond. I especially love Hiei getting angry and protective over Kurama - how he pinned Hakane to the wall and threatened him, that was so sexy. And then Kurama *cough* helping out Hiei and Yusuke watching? Hothothothot.

The addition of Yomi - as always - is win in my book, and I love how you had him fight calmly and elegantly. He's so ridiculously powerful and you illustrate that well. But Yusuke Hiei and Kurama fighting the cheetah bitch? AWESOME. I can't gush enough about that. I love fight scenes and you gave it to us in spades. I can't wait to see more!

Well, I wish Hiei could had more fun with Hakane but this all out free-for-all battle is awesome. I just hope Yusuke can put his questions aside for later. And that he won't be angry.

You keep me entertained... For that you get a cookie!!! And a kiss from Kurama... Followed by a lick from Youko... Please write more!

Poor Yusuke! his pain needs to end!...and threesomes need to start happening...if you get my drift.
Good, great, awesome job so far! Keep it up!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie