rate_review Reviews

omg! yummeh! XD And you had me laughing hysterically when Kurama found that beetle in Yusuke's hair. heheh Also, I just love how great you are at making everything so visual to me. The dreams are like, wow. It's awesome. ^o^

Only two updates left?! -cries- I'm pretty sure I'll have a panic attack or something whenever I finish reading the epilogue....before going back to chapter one. XD

ok, but i get to name atleast 1 ^^ Ive always liked Xzona and Raindrop (mainly because I have a niece named Indiarain)so I would like to have at least 1 of those in there somewhere lol. And I was reading ur review responses, and I realized something. Im 1 of those people that beg 4 updates and then makes u feel guilty 4 not updating sooner... that being said... UPDATE SOON >.< I demand it!!!!!! lol XD I kid I kid, BUT now on to my chapter review!! Again a morvelious job has been done... I think I may have liked to see yuske fight harder and then have him tied up b4 they had their fun at the spring XD but thats just me lol. But I love every other aspect of this chapter in the story. And what was that o.0 ??? OVER????? So soon???!!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *sigh* it makes me sad, but as they say all good things must come to an end i suppose, im still looking forward to the next chapter anyway ^.^ and once again my review has grown out of my own control so im stopping now...

Aww, I don't want this to be almost over. Still, once it's over, I can come back a re-read my favorite parts over and over.
Great lemons in this chapter btw.

OMG! I really like your story, all the emotional upheaval and gruesome scenes, my type of story. Keep up the good work and can't wait til the next chappie

AH!! I love this story! So well written and so much going on. I can't help but crave more.

Your work remains a joy to read, and one that is well worth waiting for. I look forward to your next installment, knowing that anticipation and patience will make it all the more rewarding.

I can not put into words how excited I was after I realized that you had updatted. This story is so well written and so hot!! Please update again because you will make my day.

Thank you so much for updating. I am glad my review meant so much. I love that they are starting to work on being a trio, even if Yusuke is a bit reluctant.

on a personal note- i would totally have ur babies XD lol and on a story related note- aawwwww that was so sweet and yet so funny. reading this chapter left me to fight with the desires to smack smack our little detective or to tell him to fun faster so the demons will give chase lol !!! not only did u meet my hope but then u even went as far as to pass them! I loved how hiei was all "take it as fact or u will b taking me in a place u may not want right now!" yum demon bondage best thing in the world lol. well it was a long wait 4 this chapter so im DIEING 4 the next one! *gives big fox kit eyes* PLEASE post the next chapter 4 this amazing story soon!

Frankly, for a while, I was afraid that this was a dead story. I found it one day, I thought, "Wow, this is good! I wish there was more. At last, you have fulfilled that wish. But an we get to the point where Yusuke works through his issues and allows hiimself to be fucked again I liked that part a lot. By the way, typing with one hand is extremely difficult.