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I love it! You've done an awesome job so far, I can't wait to for the next chapter!

i love it! your way of showing emotion is astounding. and your description of everything almost makes it feel as thought i'm actually there watching it. that would be nice actually, watching kurama and yusuke. nearly wet myself with that one. ^_^ can't wait to read the rest!

Wow I hardly ever review on a story but yours is just amazing! I tell myself to be patient and that you'll get the next chapter out in good time yet I find myself eagerly checking just about everyday for an update. I love how descriptive and deep you get into not only whats going on but into each characters personality. This story makes for such a great read. I love your lemons and there's so few KxHxY out there its rather sad so to see a writer as good as you writing this makes it all worth while. Please keep up the great writing and plots. I bow down to your fanfiction greatness hehe.

YAY! UPDATE! I thought the story was going to sit in limbo. That would have sucked. No pun intended. Hopefully you will no longer leave us waiting!

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Wow....as always you deliver on the lemons. The threesome between our favorite demon boys was absolutely delicious.
You had me laughing at parts in this chapter as well, what with yusuke being thrown in the lake and all. xDD
An overall excellant chapter. Thanks for the update~

Thank you for the wonderful update! I am glad they are finally getting some of Yusuke's problems resolved. I continue to love your story, thank you for not wishing to abandon your excellent work.

This was seriously freaking hot. Like, a brain melting chapter...which I read twice. You are a sweetheart for the dedication, a real sweetheart. Thank you so much!

First off, the gore in that dream sequence, especially where Yusuke's rips her cheek out, was lovely. I don't get enough gore in fanfic and it's wonderful to see something that is gut twisting. Very vivid. Then, Yusuke running again, yet he can't run away from himself, was beautifully done.

Then there's the sex. Hiei doing something to Yusuke while Kurama is trying to get him to promise was hysterical. Especially Hiei with the half-grin and the fang. And the sex was dripping hot, as usual. The positions and the rimming and Kurama being all: We're not going to let you come....yeah, I slid out of my chair.

I think I laughed harder than Hiei when Kurama flung Yusuke into the hot spring. And you had them spar! You made Yusuke and Kurama spar! FOR THE WIN.

And that last scene, between Kurama and Yusuke really did me in. I dunno, I think that might have been hotter than the threesome, I mean, guh. AND KURAMA PULLS A BEETLE OUT OF YUSUKE'S HAIR. HAHAHAHAHA.

Also: that last line about Kurama wanting to talk to Houkeshin while he smells like sex with Yusuke had me laughing too. I love you so hard for this.

Great story and I'm glad you updated. I wonder when Yusuke will return the mating marks?

YOu have answered my prayers and gien me more Yusuke/Hiei/Kurama goodness! I'm glad you were able to update again. Your style is very impressive, and you are able to keep everyone in character. I can't wait for your next update, though I will be sad when this story is completed. Post soon, okay?