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yes, yusuke did call them monketts. awesome story btw

I'm honestly stunned at the amount of thought you put into Kurama making the dojo. I thoroughly enjoyed him taking over the running of Tourin - from him speaking with Hokushin to meeting the cook (he's a nifty OC) to dispersing the harem in a responsible way and rebuilding the room. Your descriptions were amazing.

Also, that lemon between Kurama and Yusuke made me break my fan. It was seriously seriously hot...*WHOO HOO* And you write Jin awesomely, I could hear him speaking as I read. That fight scene was pretty badass too - I like when I read fight scenes and it feels like I'm reading the manga, which is how I felt when I read that scene.

And why do I have the feeling that Kurama knew Hiei was in heat and decided to hand the reins over to Yusuke for this one? Hiei's scent was crazy-hot but where you left the chapter made me almost cry. I BETTER SEE SOME SERIOUS YUSUKE-HIEI ACTION NEXT. I BETTER.

You rock!

Love this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon.

gasp, hieis n heat! YAY ^.^ Oooh that makes me happy! He was gone far 2 long. hehehe, that shouldnt make me as happy as it dose :D and can i point out just how bad i want that dojo in my house??? freaking amazing. This chapter was so great. we even got a visit from old friends. But i think old yuskes slipping if he can barely make 4 hours against jin. Haha just think about how bad kuwabara would freak if he came 2 visit lol. sorry that was my random moment 4 this review lol. Man can i point out how evil cliffys r -.- ?!?!?! and uh-hu, yeah, sure, blame the grapefruit -.- we all know whos fault it really is... the SPOON from the grapefruits falut!!!! or maybe york peppermint patties... not sure which :/ ... Ok i lied i had 2.5 random moments n this review :P Oh now im desperate for the next chapter, I NEED hiei smut !!! UPDATE NOW DAMIT!!!! lol ok ill tone it down some, dont meep on me again lol. How about please keep updating? that nice enough 4 u lol.

You're so evil!!! *Kills nearest grapefruit* I want so bad to see Hiei in heat!

Great chapter, I loved it when Jin and co. came in. I can't get enough of those guys. I think I'd kill for that dojo though. It sounds like heaven on earth (or rather, in Makai). I hope the next chapter comes out soon! I have a feeling that no matter how long it will be it'll seem like years! (I want it that bad!)

you put some awesomeness into these guys that makes me me proud of you!!!! you are an AWESOME AUTHORESS!!! and there is nothing wrong with blushing over your work. *blushing brite red* i even do so! WHILE reading the most HAWT HAWT stories!! (the kind to give ya a nose bleed)

so BOOYA to you and may god be on your side to finish what you have started.

laters!

miko ~_^

Once again, a wonderful chapter. Kurama's use of the hartem is wonderful, it makes me think of a conservatory I was just in, with plants growing out of the walls and such. I can only imagine that the last part was Hiei in heat, which Yusuke should enjoy, since Kurama had described it as continuous until Hiei would be unable to keep his eyes open. now that is something I'm looking forward to. Keep up the good work, you've made me very pleased.

OMG! Is Hiei in heat?!?!?! Woohooo!!!!!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

Stupid grapefruit...

xD Yayness for update. Thank you! ::throws a cookie towards the dryer::

Wow, um... when I said to update when you freaking feel like it, I didn't think you'd take it as a challenge!! But anyway, thanks for the update. It was well appreciated.

Thanks so much and keep on rockin!