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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that there are very few people (even on AFF) who actually write the nitty grittiness of sex. I think you are the first person, as far as I've read, who has actually mentioned cum coming out of orifices! And Hiei was even nice enough to help clean it up, just like a caring lover would! Jesus! I've been waiting for someone to write about real sex lol - not this, "and he touched his special no no place that you should never touch unless you are married to them." Okay, I'm exaggerating, but still! I appreciate the fact that you have caring moments but also show the true side of sex. Growth of a Spirit Detective was by far one of the best fics I have read. It was well written and very fluid. Thank you so much for sticking to it to the very end. I wasn't disappointed at all! Bravo! :D
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story. you write extremely well and can't wait for more updates
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
once again another wonderful chapter. love it.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story its amazing i love it and it is an interesting interpretation of how life could be in a yaoi world after the tournament i would really appreciate u updating soon
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the drawn out fight! I can see Yusuke doing that just for shits and giggles. Hiei embarassed! That's a first. LOL. Kurama was ridiculously sneaky on that one. I approve! Can't wait for the epilogue! Hopefully it's soon! Also, appreciate the complete and utter sexiness. Fans self.
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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say. *tears up* You dedicated that awesome fucking Yusuke/Chu fight to me? Rilly? Rilly rilly? *tackles you with glomps* That scene, and the scene before it, was the shit. I know I've said this before, but this story so reads like I'm watching the show - you have the fighting and the atmosphere down perfectly, the balance of silliness and ass-kicking. They should have consulted you when writing the Makai Tournament and maybe the plot for the show would have been 10X better.
And that Yusuke/Hiei scene was hot hot hot. HAHAHAHA I knew Kurama knew and left them alone together. That wanton, mewling, blushing Hiei is a total turn-on. I don't blame Yusuke for hitting that and hitting it hard.
The last scene was so sweet. Where Yusuke "fucking needed" both of them and Hiei got a bit jealous and assertive. AND DOUBLE PEN WITH PLANTS? I'M IN. WHERE CAN I BUY TICKETS TO THAT?!? *sends you nekkid bois for inspiration*
And that Yusuke/Hiei scene was hot hot hot. HAHAHAHA I knew Kurama knew and left them alone together. That wanton, mewling, blushing Hiei is a total turn-on. I don't blame Yusuke for hitting that and hitting it hard.
The last scene was so sweet. Where Yusuke "fucking needed" both of them and Hiei got a bit jealous and assertive. AND DOUBLE PEN WITH PLANTS? I'M IN. WHERE CAN I BUY TICKETS TO THAT?!? *sends you nekkid bois for inspiration*
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As I have been giving you a short review with the edits, I haven't been leaving them here, but I have to say the citrus in this chapter outdid all the rest. I had to read it again. That and you said there was more than what I saw. I likey.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-cackles madly- Yes! Hiei in heat! I think Yusuke did a pretty good job dealing with that. XD Twas absolutely yummy. And of course, I can't pass up that kick ass fight. Gods, I loved it! I honestly felt like I was watching it instead of reading. ^o^ I just love your details. They are that damn awesome. I really must stay tuned for the epilogue. How could I not?!
Also, SLINKY!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO! Lord, I was laughing so damn hard at that. Even shared it with my mother, who proceeded to laugh her butt off as well. Oh, the joys of having a perverted family. heheh
I love your writing and look forward to whatever else you crank out. ^^
Also, SLINKY!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO! Lord, I was laughing so damn hard at that. Even shared it with my mother, who proceeded to laugh her butt off as well. Oh, the joys of having a perverted family. heheh
I love your writing and look forward to whatever else you crank out. ^^
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am sad this is ending but happy that you UPDATED!!!
n-e-ways, had a nose bleed session when i re-read this!! Hiei in heat!!! *shivers running up and down spine* BOO-FUCKING-YA!!!
*ahem* sorry. that sliped.
as for the fights, WOW, just WOW! the fight parts i have probs with and can never get them the way i want them. but yours are so....WOW!!
i wonder if you have any other ideas in store for a sequel???? just asking!
laters! and MAJOR LOVES!!!!
miko ~_^
n-e-ways, had a nose bleed session when i re-read this!! Hiei in heat!!! *shivers running up and down spine* BOO-FUCKING-YA!!!
*ahem* sorry. that sliped.
as for the fights, WOW, just WOW! the fight parts i have probs with and can never get them the way i want them. but yours are so....WOW!!
i wonder if you have any other ideas in store for a sequel???? just asking!
laters! and MAJOR LOVES!!!!
miko ~_^
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew because I am mentally linked to you >:) didnt you know that lol? Oh I can see all kinds of fun happening in the next chapter :D but really... its the last chapter :( ????? why must you do that to me Q.Q sigh... so sad. But why on earth was yusuke 1) out of it for so long? and 2) ignoring hiei??!!! the nerve of him lol. Oh and fyi I have no defense to the york patties lol. And on a side note are you planning on writing another fanfic for yu yu hakusho when this one is done??? please say yes lol!!! Well since asking nice got a better response I guess I will go with that again. Pretty please update soon with extra lemons on top ^.^ because I REALLYYYY want to read threesome with double pentration.. drool .... oh the yummyness....