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whew! *fans self* that was too hot for words. i just love your writing style. i'm glad i'm not the only one that thought that something happened between hiei and yusuke during that scene. me and my friends call scenes like that suspect moments. we'd be like "those two just popped up outta nowhere together and they were together for a long time...they were soo fucking!" lol. anyway, i'm glad my reviews encourage you to write more. i went back and reread "drip" not to long ago and saw that you were thinking about writing a sequel but i'm glad you didn't. i think that fic ended perfectly and a sequel, i think, would've tainted the feelings between the brothers. i look foward to the first chap of this, seeing how kurxyusxhiei is my fav threesome of all time. so until next time , ja!

~Devious

Wow. Just wow. But before I sing your praises, there are a few things I have to nitpick about: Your prose is a bit too purple, but it's not jarring enough to be distracting. I think you got the boys very much IC (especially Yûsuke!), and I like that you didn't bash the girls or Kuwabara (or Sensui, for that matter). Your sex scenes are pretty hot, and you seem to have an extremely wicked sense of humor (I spit out my drink when you described Sensui's taste in guys (by Yûsuke) as "tall, dark, and gruesome"). So keep on writing, and hopefully you'll iron out some of the kinks!

I really liked the recap on this one, how you illustrated the scene from Hiei's POV, it was almost like watching the show - just from a different angle. And the lemon? Yeah, I had to be somewhere and I decided to be late because I wanted to read this. The lemon was very fitting for Yusuke and Hiei - no words, just raw lust and carnality. The biting and the scratching and the throwing into trees and onto the ground would be just what happens between them - you hit it dead on. And I really had no problem with Hiei being uke - especially with the way he rode Yusuke *braindead*. And the part where you fit the invading demons in? That's genius right there.

I also enjoyed how you wrapped the chapter up - Hiei ignoring Yusuke yet not ignoring him, and Kurama picking up on exactly what happened between Hiei and Yusuke. Lovely. You're fucking awesome!

lol. Granted, I like reading about Kurama better, but that was pretty good, especially at the end when Kurama was laughing at Hiei. No fears, it measured up just find.

I'm really enjoying this story... I mean really... Oh if it's possible can you e-mail me when you update again? I never really go to the yu yu hakusho part of this website so I don't know when the next time I'll be back here. The look on Kuwabara's face when he stumbled in on Kurama and Yusuke was priceless. I was kind of hoping on seeing how he'd react to Yusuke when they saw each other during decent hours but I guess not. And I don't mind that you reiterated some of the scenes from the anime... It's been a while since I saw it and it was fun recreated it in my head again... Kurama's prone form standing their at the tournament while he lost concsiouness... it brought back good memories.

Anyway my e-mail is simplywandering@yahoo.com

And thank you for a good read.

It's really good so far, and I'm looking forward to your update.

Oh my god u have 2 update this soon. Its believable and creative i cant wait 2 see how hiei fits in

that was amazing! i loved it. i look foward to your next update.

i want more give me more!!! :)

me like i can't wait for the next chapter, you should have yusuke try the bottom role if he is going to have sex with hiei next. i just can't see hiei as the submissive type