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for Growth of a Spirit Detective

by azalea

schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I hope you update soon. Please? ^___^
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa must update! (yaoi senses going crazy!) I haven't read a yu yu three way this good since... well I can't actully remember the name of the fic but it was good too. I love it when those three realize that life and sex is so much better then they are together to share ^^ . please update soon, I really want to know whats going on with this mission and hope that yusuke realizes that hiei and kurama want him for more then just his heat (lol)....so much...yaoi..goodness!

Ja!
person kitkit
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love..i can't wait to see what happens when yusuke goes on the mission in his heat..i can just see a demon getting taken over by yusuke scent and trying to rape yusuke
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shall we discuss all the hotness in this chapter? GRAB YOUR FANS.

-Hiei just pwning Yusuke and sliding under him to pleasure him.
-Yusuke in Hiei's lap, kissing him senseless.
-Kurama stumbling in the stairwell because of the scent Yusuke's giving off. Wow, it has to be some powerful stuff for someone as graceful as Kurama to almost fall down.
-Kurama...with the plant, and Hiei whispering in his ear giving instructions. That's when I almost popped a gasket.
-Kurama telling Yusuke to fuck him.
-Just...the whole threesome. Gyah. I love that Hiei tops, that's made of awesome.
-Yusuke saying When I wake up in the morning, I’m going to find my hand covered in my own cum… I like that he has no memories of and no control over what's happening to him. Poor thing.
-Hie and Kurama losing control and marking Yusuke.

You really deliver on the lemons. They're delicious and different and something I want to read over and over. *applause* I'm looking forward to more from you!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.... just...wow.... Can u be in love with a story???? If so I think I just hit that point. LOL> this story is so well planned and written.I love the mini angst fest going on in the mind right now. Its oh so perfect. And ur chapters r just the right lenght. I think u may be one of the best people on this website. Theres not even any OOCness. PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I want to read more of the story so much!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
New Reader: OMG! I absolutely LOVE this! The idea, the way it's written, the ones that are involved. EVERYTHING! I even had to change my background to Yusuke! XD I can't wait till you update! I may just have to save this to my computer tho, for whenever I have the urge to read an awesome fic. (with your permission of course. ^^)
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is hottt!!!!!!! please update, I LOVE Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke couplings, and there just aren't enough good ones in the world... update update update, please!!!
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Very very interesting!!!! I am very excited about this story!! I can't wait to read more! I love when Yusuke is all insecure in his
feelings but Kurama/Hiei won't let him be! Update soon!!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another one! Another one! That was so awsome I had to read it twice. :)
I'd love to have skills like yours. I hope you continue, you have my full and undivided attention with this story.
I can't wait to see if Yusuke accepts them as mates or if Hiei and Kurama all-of-a-sudden leave or something. I hope this hasd a happy ending.
Pleeeaaaasse keep going! You inspire me to write good fics too! :D

forever forgetting to log in when I need to,
Toushikku
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, that was hella hot!! man, my yusuke is one hot bitch! that's one of many things that i love about him. can easily be a super seme one minute or a really hot bitch in the next. i just loved it when hiei was yanked on top of yusuke and he yells "impatient" then gets to work. lol! dude, i, so, cant wait for your next update. i wanna know more about this mission and plans of how hiei and kurama plan on courting yusuke and they better be courting him after marking him like that. *is in protect yus-chan mode* see ya next time.

~Devious

P. S. misuse of botany *snickers* looks like the best way to use it to me ^__^