rate_review Reviews

love it

You know what I like about you? You can do gore, and I like gore. Come on, these guys are demons, and you deliver on their demonic nature. Aside from that, I was gonna give you crap for there not being a lemon in this :D but then you put in Kurama torture and possible rape, which is always thumbs up in my book. And of couse, you have Hiei being badass, which is another thumbs up.

I loved Yusuke's reaction to the gore (he's still reeling from the dreams) and how you portrayed Kurama's incoherence. It's tough to do that right without making him OOC and you did it Just Right. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

You better have the next chapter up soon! How could you leave things like this?! Poor Kurama, I hope Hiei slices off Hakane's body parts one by one and then guts him! (Unless you can think of something better?)

Kyaaa!!!! I've been waiting for this chapter for so long. XD -hugs and kisses- The wait was worth it tho! -more hugs and kisses- -takes deep breath to calm down- I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see just how bloody(er) that room will be after Hiei is done. ^o^ And for some reason, I can't help but like your torture methods. >.>;; hmm....anyways, keep up the great work! -hands you the bag with the rest of the hugs and kisses- :P

okay, that PISSES ME OFF!!! That bitch Kaname better be killed off quick! And Hakane or whatever his name is! Argh! I feel So sorry for Kurama. Please let them be okay.
Otherwise, I absolutly LOVE this story, please continue and update again soon.

Hugs & kisses

Katonie

This story is great, please update soon!

I am really loving this story!! I has both my favorite pairings in it. HxK and KxY Rocks!!!!!

This has to be my favorite chapter, it;s just awesome!!! I have to agree with Kuwabara about his brain imploding because mine certainly did! And what's up with Hiei being a peeping tom, he sure got an eye full!!!! Great work!!!!!!!

DAMN, thE plant porn was so fucking HOT! Kudos!

Love the story line so far can not wait for more story. But don't rush it if the muse will not come out to play give it time and if it dose whahoo more story. I like the way your story plays out smoothly and you don't rush the story just to get to the sex scenes which are very hot as well. I like the play between Hiei/Yusuke and Kurama. I've found I like the three way love triangles the best in stories, and this one is another good one in a sea of two-somes that are out there. The only one that matches this is one I stumbled onto several weeks ago called Demon Desires by ShioriFoxiesMom yours is shaping up to being better so take the time on the plot don't rush the story it will be better for it. I like the way you're pretty much keeping Hiei/Yusuke/Kurama in character but still putting a little more depth to them that is believable as well a entertaining. I can just see in my minds eye the exspression,looks and feelings that your words create in the stories situations. I can not wait to see what you come up with for what happens on the mission and Yusuke reaction or nonreaction the marking that both Hiei and Kurama put on him without meaning to before he gave his consent and what it mean. I also like how Yusuke is clueless about his demon heritage. So to make a long update shorter I'll say the over all story is GREAT keep up the good work hope to see an update in the near or almost near future.