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for Unforeseen Fate

by kimisan

person inumoon3
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story. what happen next.
person inumoon3
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I really loved this chapter, and I have an inkling that Koenma might be pregnant! But that's just me, and I'll never know if you don't update! So update soon!
person inumoon3
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!!! I FREAKING WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!!
person inumoon3
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!
person inumoon3
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved it. Please, please please put up a new chap soon!
person inumoon3
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the update!!! Please update soon!!!
person Pyrokage
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please send me an email when you update this story.
person xtranew
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must confess that the sole reason I read this fic was originally because of the unusual pairings. And by unusual, I didn't mean Kurama/Yusuke, but Hiei/Koenma, because they are a very, very rare type of pairings that will only grace Yu Yu Hakusho one every 5xx FanFics. This sets up such a different background and opens many previously unexplored casualties.

The dialogs are on spot and the character's descriptions are nearly flawless---nearly, because I noticed that you're downgrading (although it was almost invisible unless someone squint real hard) some characters here. And I liked how you went into the gradual process of the building relationships, the "coming-to-accept-the-invitable" without moving too fast nor too slow. Especially in case of Yusuke/Kurama.

I can never get enough of Koenma's not-so-innocent-act without cracking a smile in the end (<-- This is mostly my inner fangirl speaking, please ignore). I can feel the emotions of both pairing respectively and I will lie if I say I don't suddenly feel very hot and bothered from that ending! Thanks for giving this to us.