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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Botan and Kurama stories, so I give you a thumbsup for doing one. But, your stories has a lot of grammer errors, everything seems to fast (as if you were just trying to get it done.), plus you go from first person to narrator way to much. You should always keep it one tense. Now this is not a flame....REPEAT THIS IS NOT A FLAME!!!!!!" I just want to leave you some suggestions to help you write better fics, so you can get a lot of reviews. I hope to see more Botan and Kurama stories from you!!!