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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay here is my brainstorm
when kurama gets home have shiori accuse him of trying to steal her bf. that the bf said that kurama was trying to suduce him and and ran away when he said no. next kurama defends himself and says he was beaten and raped and shiori askes to see the bruses that would be there and kurama cant show her becasue of his demon blood he heals fast and superfishal bruses go away quickly
have shiori torn about who to believe b/c she knows her son and wouldnt lie but she loves her bf who never raised his voice or a finger to her and with out the bruses to back up her sons story she doesnt know who to believe
throw in some angst and a kurama pitty party and a H/K lemon hot tender and steamy
thats about as far as i got
goodluck
when kurama gets home have shiori accuse him of trying to steal her bf. that the bf said that kurama was trying to suduce him and and ran away when he said no. next kurama defends himself and says he was beaten and raped and shiori askes to see the bruses that would be there and kurama cant show her becasue of his demon blood he heals fast and superfishal bruses go away quickly
have shiori torn about who to believe b/c she knows her son and wouldnt lie but she loves her bf who never raised his voice or a finger to her and with out the bruses to back up her sons story she doesnt know who to believe
throw in some angst and a kurama pitty party and a H/K lemon hot tender and steamy
thats about as far as i got
goodluck
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok here is an idea. have kurama come home and have him start to tell his mom and then just before he gets to the rape part have the bastard boyfriend walk in. then the two guys can have a stare down and before kurama can say anything the bastard boyfriend says something like ' well i have to confess.....that kurama forced me to have sex with him'....words spoken...fight....then hiei comes in and saves the day!!
i wish i had a fire demon!!
i wish i had a fire demon!!
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, reviewers. Thank you very much for all of your reviews. I could use some ideas for the next chapter, so if you have any, I would love to hear them!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should have seen my face when i saw you updated!!! i yelled "yes" and my son came into the room and said "yes what" i just told him that my fav story had new chapters added. you so rock!!!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The funny part is that I could totally see Genkai beating the crap out of that guy.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful reviews. I had this posted just a few days ago, but somehow, I deleted the wrong story, so I lost the reviews I already had. My most sincere apologies to those of you who reviewed last time! Thank you zekesbabe and kerryann! I will update soon!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue this story it is so sweet...but I cry for Kurama...*hugs tight to Kurama plushie* please don't hurt Kurama-kun anymore...I can't wait to see how Hiei will react to this!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW! Poor Kurama! Mind you...there's something so delicious about making him suffer...I LOVE IT! You'd better update soon!
Luv
Zekesbabe
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Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good for Genkai, going over to the house to defend Kurama,but it could also have made it worse for him at home.I'm glad Kurama wasn't upset about her intervention with this as well.Boy,I can't wait for Hiei to find out I'll bet upset won't even cover what his mood will be.Hiei has the best weapon to get even (his 3rd eye)and he never even has to touch the jerk.I can't wait for the next update,great job on this story so far.