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person Hemamal
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!!
person shelljax
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice i really liked it.
person nytekit
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I should have known this was yours just by reading it. But for some reason I didn't notice, but it makes a lot more sense to me why I like it now. You never disappoint. Bet if I'd been on LJ recently I could have read this already.

Great job! ^^
person Juxtathought
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A few of Kurama's lines were pretty cheap, but hey, the overall result was damn hot. I hope you continue this. This 'something that's coming' sounds interesting. Is it the Sensui chapter?
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP that was an amazing piece of writing. Hot, too. I usually don't read about the main boys, but you imagery was just so...vivid. Beautiful!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful as usual. I really love the way you manage to keep the characters true to themselves.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Sweaty! I loved it. It was very hot, and I love the tentativeness mixed with the raw desire. It's like a fire that's nervous about burning. Very nicely written!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot!!! And very well written.
person kitkit
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow hot as always
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very hot. i've alway loved your stories. never change. i wish it wasn't a one shot i want to know more about Yusukes and the lonelyness that was heard in his voice. oh well beggers can't be choosers. please write more stories soon. ^_^