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Love this story! I hate Keiko she really pisses me off.

Ooooh, hot! I love the hesitation the Hiei felt leading up to it, but the boldness he showed to Yusuke - true Hiei form. You kept them very much in character and kept me very much engaged in the story. I like the plot you gave it; it was very realistic. I can see Keiko leading him on but cutting him off at the last moment. I like the idea that Yusuke now has a secret source of relief. I also really liked the trust Hiei showed in the booth - turning his back to Yusuke, being so exposed, allowing Yusuke to top him. He made himself vulnerable, and for Hiei's character, that says a lot. It's not a love thing, but a trust thing, and I think you wrote it beautifully.

LOL, I love the porn shop setting. I've heard tales of those rooms with the holes in the walls. I say Keiko needs to learn what the term cock tease means because if you looked it up in the dictionary her picture would be there. Well, according to this story anyway LOL. I'd be curious to see how this story progressed if you ever decide to continue writing it. Good job :)

please don't say its the end, i mean come on how you stop it right thee after hiei saying what he was going to do to ysuke after they get back to the apartment and having yusuke saying that it would be a long time before keiko would ever find out so wouldn't that suggest that there sould be more. so please do end it there i mean not many people write yusuke and hiei fics.

wow i love it as always

That was... gah! Yummy, lemony goodness -- I'm speechless.

$%^$&gaula%*%^dkvdih$%^gsygs%*&^ YAY PORN.

I don't know how you come up with these little scenarios (actually I do - I'm willing to bet that Hiei and Yusuke fuck in your head all day long) but they rule! Really, if Keiko isn't going to put out, then someone else is going to have to take over. Yusuke needs to test drive the car before he buys it.

But Hiei...in Yusuke's lap...in that position. Yeah, I need a new brain. Now you have to write what happens when they get back to the house.

Love ya girlie.

This was quite excellent. Keiko is an evil wench. I don't think I would wait for her either. Hell the fact that Yusuke is sticking with her with Hiei on the side is amazing to me. Anyway, great story.

wealsdasldfj! Amazing! It's nice to see a Yusuke/Hiei pairing

"I can see you need a good fuck and I'm just in the mood to see if you're as good as I've imagined you to be."

Love that line

Damn that was hot. A sequel with Yusuke getting as good as he gave would be even hotter.