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for Eternal Damnation

by ryukotsusei

schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting anxiously on update for this and others. I hope to hear from you soon!
person kitkit
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it this is so orignal
person kimisan
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey chickadee! you killed Yukina, omg you are so wrong. you didn't even torture her first, what's up with that? some rape or assraping would have been excellent. i guess i'll have to accept that but i want someone to lose an eye in the next chapter or no hiei smex for yous. excellent beginning and as far as your health issues are concerned i told you what you need. i got a spot on my bed with your name on it. hiei and aoshi can rub your feet while you have you a laptop to write on. think about it *winks*
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dood. I hope you continue this because it's fucking brutal. And I love brutality in my stories. I also want to see who else you kill.

I'm glad to see you're feeling better. You've been on my mind.
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I said that while you were writing this story and I'm saying it again. Your plotline is original and very well written.
I can't even begin to imagine what Hiei must be feeling right about now and I can't wait to know what you have in store for him. I feel really bad for Yukina but also a sense of relief, her suffering is over and Enma can't do anything more to her. How will Botan handle learning she had a part in it as well and how will Koenma react?
LOL, so many unanswered question. I can't wait to read more when you can update and I wish you the best with your health issues.