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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,Shiori is very calm and observent to whats going on.One more question she may want to ask as well is"if the marking go'es on to long without an answer does Kurama lose any free will"after all in this phase he is nothing but a slave of sorts to the guys.I can't wait for the next chapter ,great job so far.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just found your story today and i have to say this is really good!!! i love how you kept yomi and kurama friends. in almost most stories i've read, yomi and kurama are potrayed as enemies. i personally think they should stay friends in any story. any way, i love your story and i like how you update frequently.im excited to see what happens next in the next chapter.i think you should've done a lemon with yomi and aya. i would've loved to see how yomi uses his new pet. lol. but without the lemon its still good. so, keep up the good work!!!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv your stories *bows down* i'm not worthy to read your fics they are just too good. man i can't wait to get to your level. i hope you update soon so we can hear wat are fav demons will decide. i hope things work out for them, they're too cute to be alone. XD
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 is a big "wow".What a way to say we're sorry to the fox.Wondering what Kurama will say when his head clears all the way,now that he's mated to both of them with out his say on the matter in love with them or not.Very well done
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm almost afraid to say this, but I feel that Kurama does not deserve either Hiei or Yusuke. If either of the two truly were in love with him, either of them would not have cheated so easily with the excuse that they have "feelings" for each other too. They should at least have made an effort to resist the attraction or at least talked it over. Hurting should not be done so easily and I don't think it can be healed just as easily. I think Kurama should have given Yomi a chance. Having a relationship does not quickly escalate to sex and stuff. As everyone knows, love and relationship are built on respect and trust. Still, I am very intriqued with the story, although I'm really, really irritated with Hiei and Yusuke. I'm a big fan of threesome between Y/K/H, but this time, H and Y deserve each other in a bad way. I hope you make the two idiots suffer muchly. Thanks for the read!
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter as always!! I can't wait for more! You know that I'm strictly a HieixKurama fan. You can tell that in my stories. However, I have come to like the way you write KuramaxYusukeXHiei. I will only ever read that pairing from you so I hope you take that as a compliment cause it truly is. Once again, great chapter, great story!! I Want More!!!!
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, and I'd like to order my own pleasure youko with a side of surly fire demon. Actually I'll take two of each, I might break the first ones. Thanks.
And how could you end there? You're cruel! But I'm really enjoying this...almost as much as Yomi's enjoying his gift. :D Can't wait for the next update!
And how could you end there? You're cruel! But I'm really enjoying this...almost as much as Yomi's enjoying his gift. :D Can't wait for the next update!
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok,nows their chance.Boy will Kurama be mad at Yomi if this doesn't work out.I can't wait to see who talks first between them,thwe boys have alot of work ahead of them to get Kurama to listen(I think)Anyway, great job on this chapter and can't wait to see ehat happens now
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep writing!
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!I can not believe that you left off right there!Now how am I suppose to get to sleep tonight?:P?
That.Was.Not.Cool.,but your story is amazing so far,please continue...I really would like to see who Kurama
ends up with;even tho' a smexy 3some should not be out of the question!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
That.Was.Not.Cool.,but your story is amazing so far,please continue...I really would like to see who Kurama
ends up with;even tho' a smexy 3some should not be out of the question!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!