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aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww this chapter was sssssssssssoooooooooooooo cute XD. i luvd how u made yusuke and hiei so dominant that they would have actually fought kurama that was hot. i can't wait for u to update so update soon.

I thought chapter 8 was great.It should take Kurama a little while to get used to having to share his lovers with each other.Watching him be the dominated one is interesting as well and shows just how much he loved them both to allow it.Info or comfort chapters may not always be fun but they are needed and this one was done quit well.Nice Job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I didn't think Chapter 8 was bad at all. Hiei and Yusuke betrayed Kurama, and it would be abnormal for Kurama to just accept the two of them and watch them be intimate with each other without some distress. You're analyzing Kurama's reactions and portraying them accurately.

Oh yeah, and the sex was hot. Our favourite kistune needs time, but he will be won over soon - who can resist Yusuke and Hiei, after all?

I love that you write a conflicted Kurama. He's in love with both men, but gets jealous when he sees or feels them being touchy-feely towards each other. The conflict is really good and very exciting for the story and makes for the angst-slut in me to really relish it. So, thank you! It would be even more exciting and sexy if someone comes along (too bad karasu is dead) to provide a formidable competition for Kurama's affection. Kurama is in a very vulnerable state right now. As you showed in the latest chapter, one of his options is to escape and get out of the relationship. Demon jealousy is good. But to have both Hiei and Yusuke jealous of Kurama is the best thing ever!

sorry i didn't review for the other chapters but damn tis story is great! i've always loved H/Y/K fics. i mean having one with the other is godd too, but having all three of them together is just hot. keep up the great work. can't wait to see what happens between them.

WOW!!! You are so great. I look for your ficcies EVERY time I get on AFF. You are one of my favs and you keep out-doing yourself everytime! Keep it up. I can not wait to see what is next.

Wow. That chapter went up FAST. I barely had time to read the last one. I liked your different take on the markings and the matings, it's obvious you've put a lot of thought into that. I also liked Shiori's last question. :D

And on another note, I really love that you're writing more erotic stuff now. I say do more yaoified stuff like this, we're talking about this story over on LJ right now.

Gods Hiei, whatever you just did do it again, it makes him moan so nice around my cock.

Yeah, and that's where I broke my arm. YAY PORN. That whole scene was very inventive, I liked that there was some play, and then they talked, and then our boys insisted on more play and Kurama was claimed. Beautiful. Yaoiland is the best place ever.

And Hiei being in control? Hawt. WRTIE MORE.

Great, Great, Great Chapter!!!!! I am looking forward to the next one. I can't believe I'm asking for this, but i hope you make this a threesome mating. it actually sounds wrong if it's not, because one of them will get hurt. I hope you do make this a threesome. Hurry and update, please!!! ^_^

I love it, but I love threesomes that include Kurama and Hiei, but I also love Kurama/Yomi. I do like what you did with the new youko and Yomi, but not as great as I would with just Yomi/Kurama XD But you are right, Yomi has became sophisticated and cultured and would probably not take Kurama by force, I dunno, but if you also look at how cruel he is in the anime, and probably manga*haven't gotten that far yet* He, if wanted, would go that far, ya knows? ^^ anyway, I will shut up. I love the fic, keep posting.