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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kuronue as well? So both of them kinda have split personalities now - only all of them are aware of what actions the other half of the persona take... Hm..
Noticed that you tend to use the wrong words sometimes (like accept instead of except) or that you make spelling mistakes. You might want to consider getting a beta? Also, I think I've mentioned this before, but it's Jagan and Gandara, not Jagon and Gandura.
Noticed that you tend to use the wrong words sometimes (like accept instead of except) or that you make spelling mistakes. You might want to consider getting a beta? Also, I think I've mentioned this before, but it's Jagan and Gandara, not Jagon and Gandura.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely fic, very nice, and a happy ending to boot! I think the sweetest scene was either the Kuronue/Shuuichi scene, or the Youko/Kuronue. Kuronue's an old favorite of mine, and this whole story made me happy. Though I have to say, if I was Yukina, I think would have taken a little more time to adjust to the addition to the family. Not unhappy, just more wary. But then, Yukina always has been sweet and trusting. Good story, I'm lovin' it. Write another one? PLEASE?!!!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! What more can I say!?!??!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore you. Ever since yu started posting on aff, I have read all of you stories. You are wonderful and I am sorry I haven't been able to review and tell you just how much I like each of them. You are wonderful and this series is great and I can not wait to read your next story and just so you know, even if I don't review I will read and enjoy your stories. I'll Try to be better. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I only now discovered this fic. It's great, so far -- I've just finished the first chapter. I love Kuronue, and there are very few fics that include him. The reincarnation into Hiei is a nice twist.
I think you might get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviews. Right now it's set to logged-in only. Many readers don't have accounts here or won't take the time to log in.
Anyway, I'm going to get back to reading the rest of this fic. Thank you for posting it here.
I think you might get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviews. Right now it's set to logged-in only. Many readers don't have accounts here or won't take the time to log in.
Anyway, I'm going to get back to reading the rest of this fic. Thank you for posting it here.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you think you shouldn't update this story line here because I've read all of them on the other site and looked forward to seeing them here on this one.Although its my fault for not reviewing here like I should.I looked forward to seeing what new things you'd add for this site.Though I understand why I'm hoping you don't become to dishartened and continue here.If not I'll be checking out your site.
Great job anyway
Great job anyway