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I wished it would have been yusuke to be the father!!! T^T *tears*

You need to finish this darn story its goood I want all three members in this triangle to be happy with each other I want them to all be mated to each other no keiko isn't need for yusuke so make with the happy 3 mated guys to each other lol u can do it your the writer.......so please hurry and update thanks keep up great work

Gah! You're so mean I've been waiting for this update forever and you end the chapter like that? I love it update soon!

Hiei and Kurama's child. Hiei is so lucky to have such a sexy fox as the father of his child. I busted out laughing when Hiei feared their baby would come out super pervy because his father is. I feel kind of bad for Yusuke but that last outburst crushed that. What a horrible thing to say, jerk!!!!

wow this is getting serious

hi! i just discovered your story and i couldn't stop myself from reading continuously so i'll just make an overall review. first, i must commend your for the unique plot line. not that many fics portray hiei as the player. second, i love the way you developed their characters, very unique with such powerful emotions. third, i absolutely love the progress of the story, how hiei is getting the best of both worlds but is still completely confused, and how kurama and yusuke fight for his affection. well then. i am absolutely thrilled that hiei chose kurama in the end. personally, i firmly believe that they should, must, have to end up together always. i can't imagine either of them being with someone else. you placed great care in expressing their emotions here. kurama's pain and unconditional love, hiei's confusion and admission of love (even if to himself only), and yusuke's blind rage and jealousy. although i understand where yusuke is coming from, i still believe that kurama and hiei should end up together. they are brilliant for each other. and im not saying this because i like them personally. its just that the way you wrote the last couple of chapters just screams kurama for hiei (and you won't hear..or read.. me complaining).i love the last two parts of the last chapter most especially. hiei conversing with himself as he comes to terms with his pregnancy and love is really cute. kurama is just so supportive and loving, willing to let hiei have other lovers as long as he comes back at the end of the say. i think this is very selfless of him, and i love it. yusuke's last line was him being a jerk, and a selfish jerk at that. ican't wait to see what happens next. i love your fic. your a good writer with impeccable english to back up your skill. your craft is a good piece of work. great job! hope you update soon (selfish, i know..but hey, i can't get enough of it especially now that tension is mile-high). ;)

i hope that hiei ends up with yusuke. i don't like how kurama is acting, he's not really letting yusuke get anywhere near hiei during the day and then gets pissed at night when hiei's with yusuke. a baby between yusuke and hiei would be so cute!!!!

wow

Uh oh!!!!!!!!!! Hiei got caught in the act! Now he's going to get two guys cusing him out.

Oh! Hiei got off so easy!!