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for A Tortured Spirit Reborn

by Shiyva

schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! update soon! -x-
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit...it's not everyday someone pulls off a convincing Original Character, but your description was perfect, I can picture a female Hiei with black and aqua streaked hair...I can picture the smug look f defiance she would have on her face. Excellent job with her personality as well!

Interesting story thus far, can't wait to see where you'll take it...I noticed your profile is fairly new...are you a new writer, or is it just a new account?? If it's your first time, you've done exceptionally well..don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews...only the AFF YYH Yaoi goddesses like BlueUtopiah and MHMartini get loads of reviews...

Looking foreward to your next update!

-Raine