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for Forced Apart By Duty

by ryukotsusei

schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"You're so fucking tight on my cock" *gibbers*

Seriously, you really exploit the in-character dirty talk. It's so good for my soul. And while I LOVE how you wind plot though your porn, sometimes a nice PWP is just what I need. Just...awesome. I love how Hiei held out, and that position at the end with Yusuke on his knees, back against Hiei? Yes, there was bloodloss on my part.

Love you so hard.
person kit-kit
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so hot..i just love pwp's.
person thoth_moon (not signed in)
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Terrific ^__^ It's a little odd to me, imagining Hiei--who is considerably smaller--bossing around Yusuke, who's supposed to be the leader and all XD Very good, sex without a ridiculously excessive description of the sex.
person steph8503
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great please write more
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot. It was so sweet Yusuke asking if they could pretend it was forever.