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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!^-^
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It gets better every time I read it.Sorry I havn't reviewed like I should but I've read this on FF.net as well and loved it there.I didn't think to review it here as well.Sorry.Make no mistake though this is very good and you do very well with lemons.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I've been reading, just not reviewing. I frikken love your stories! I love the 'World's Apart' and it's sequel 'And Baby makes....How many?' They were both frikken sweet! This one's awesome too! I love this one too! Though it makes me depressed when you don't update everyday like you did a couple chappies before! I like this one lots. Maybe next one you could do is a one shot with a seme Kurama again? xD You can do something where Kurama makes Hiei the 'attract youko's cologne'. Cept he meant to give Hiei a different one, but makes a mistake and gives Hiei the youko cologne. xD That would be cool too! xD Keep up the good work on your stories. Oh and it would probably be good that I mention your story is good so no one reviews since it's so fucking awesome!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! And belive me I know how hard it is to find a good YYH story!! Can't wait till you up date. Till next time. laters!
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@(\/ LOOK I MADE YOU A RABBIT!!! So please update soon k?
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@(\/ LOOK I MADE YOU A RABBIT!!! So please update soon k?
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like the direction this story is going and the way it is written, i feel kinda bad for yusuke though, hopefully you'll fix that update soon
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum... I don't know. I must admit, this story started out wonderfully. But then... as it started to pick up... not so much.
It was like... ho-hum, how to phrase it? Like a nice cake batter in the beginning. Then you added milk, and it got all smooth and lovely. But then you just kept letting that milk flow until everything got all watery, clumps broke up, and there was just no structure or real plausible action anymore. It just all became watery...
But I don't know, the MPreg idea will probably keep me anchored to the story for a while.
It was like... ho-hum, how to phrase it? Like a nice cake batter in the beginning. Then you added milk, and it got all smooth and lovely. But then you just kept letting that milk flow until everything got all watery, clumps broke up, and there was just no structure or real plausible action anymore. It just all became watery...
But I don't know, the MPreg idea will probably keep me anchored to the story for a while.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As great as more fluffy stories are I think this is more believable than all the fluffy stuff. i really like this and I'm looking forward to Kurama claiming Yusuke, I'd like to see how they will interact.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! It's wonderful, I really think that this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Please update soon :)
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your fics; the perfect blend of sweet, erotic and romantic... just the way any good love story should be! As someone who was sick at home and read them all within the last few days, I hope I'll be forgiven, then, if I make one small beta observation: The word you've been looking for is 'writhe' - not 'wither', as these boys always seem to do in your tales. LOL, either haul out your Webster's or just trust me when I say that 'wither' is definitely NOT something that a man should do in bed. ^_^
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH, GIMME MORE GIMME MORE...please?