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Okay, I have reached chapter4 of this fic and I am loving it.


When I read Shiori's reaction I just had to comment ^^ To me this is one of the most realistic reactions I have read for her towards the 'truth' So thank you for that.

I love the little demon culture you have added and I look forward to K/H/Y!!!!

You have given the K/H relationship an interesting angle and I am eager to continue reading.

I really feel sorry for Keiko's parents. I know they are virtually non entities in the anime, but they existed, and they have lost their daughter, and their son in law has taken their only grandchild to the Makai (about which they haven't a clue so they don't even know if their grandchild is safe) but still... Kurama's mom gets to see their grandchild and they (and Yuske's mom) don't get anyone to love. It is really very sad.

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See, the problem with aff is the lack of reviews. Sure they're not as plentiful as ff.net, but you do get a few devoted followers. I don't think that this site ever really recovered from their blackout earlier this year.

That being said, I'm really glad you posted this story here, this one was made for aff. And I read it again and again, this really is my favourite. I don't know how you do it, but you write the hottest sex scenes without being graphic, which is something I can't do. And you managed to get Keiko out of the picture without bashing her, which I like.

I'm really happy that you're posting here.

aww.. so cute! I wish it was longe though!they make such a cute three some with such a cute lil baby! I really hope you will get inspiration to do more ^^ Preggors hiei will be cute! and then cute lil babeh! I wonder what he will look like.. or she!

The scene was awkward, and felt a little out of place. You tried, don't get me wrong, I think it was done okay. The scene was a little awkward and so was the end. I think you could have improved at the end, adding more, and stuff.

all i hav to say as i read this fic is "what took u so long to write this!" i always wanted to read a good fic that had our fav demons together and u hav honored that vision, thank u. i luvd this chapter and was very pleased i must say. cant wait to read more. p.s. i luv kyo, he is too cute. ok peace

Good as always,great as exspected

okay okay so I barely EVER review but I must because.. this is like omg the best fic EVER if you don't do any more three somes.. omg O.O you found your calling.. only a bit more graphic detail in the sex but thats just meXD

I am in absolute love with your story. If I ask nicely, will you continue it? Please? =^.^= *paws at*