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wow where in the world do u get your ideas that was the best freakin story write on girl keep'em coming lol

Thank you for that story I loved it, I hope you have more on te site

Wow. This is really one incredibly hot story! I'm sorry for not reviewing after every chapter. I must admit the pull of the "Next Chapter" button was too great. Brilliantly written. I could never imagine a KXHXY until I read yours, props for that! I definitely can't wait to read the rest of your stories. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post this one.

I finally finished reading demon desires and I loved it. Absoultely 100% adored it. You made the three seem really beliveable in their relationship, and I have to wonder just how many kids there will be for them. I must say that I wouldn't mind seeing a sequal to this story...(hint hint).

Thank you for posting this wonderful story! I throughly enjoyed it.

chapter 5 and 6

Wow, that is defintely one way to bring trio together. I think that you did a good job on showing Yusuke's grief especially with the condition of the house. Hiei, hiei, hiei, he is so cute in these chapters, first with bonding and taking care of kyo and then wanting to cuddle with Yusuke in the bed, in the kitchen, or anyplace he can get his hands on him! I loved it! I especially loved the part where Hiei thought of Kyo by making him is very own room in the tree house. I love hiei in this role. I normally go for him being more dominate, but he is wonderful in this role as well.

Great job with the characterizations!!!

Chap 1

Mmmm...looks like this fic is going to be interesting. I like how you incorporated the end of the anime with the beginning of your story. It really gives your story a solid background. Also, I am intrigued by the idea of the threesome...hopefully from your clues we will see a bit of Yusuke with Kurama and Hiei. Off I go to read some more. :)

Ch2

You put Yoji in their! Yoji is my favorite guy from Weiss and I was surprised and pleased to see him make an appearance. There were lots of things that I liked about this chapter such as Kurama being so kind in drawing Hiei a bath that would take away all the pains (wink, wink) and then Hiei relaxing and trusting Kurama to take care of him. That was just so cute!!! I really enjoyed how Kurama tricked Hiei into attending a party. And I must say the plot thickens when Yusuke threatens Hiei.

Overall, this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more.

chapter 3 and 4

Have I told you enough times that I love your stories? Well, Demon Desires is no exception. I thought that it was very considerate of Mukuro to wait until Hiei and Kurama were finished before knocking on the door, and really her request wasn't out of bounds...please keep it down so people can sleep. You had me laughing for a while with that.

You developed the tension between Hiei and Yuskue fairly well. I wonder how everyone will come together in the end. It is obvious that Yusuke still loves Keiko, so what happens for them to break up...mmmm something to think about.

I do believe that I liked the surprised and upset Shiori, only because in the end she accepted Kurama's demon side. But it added a little spice to the story and made you wonder for a bit if Shiori would ever become accepting of her son.

I am really enjoying this story and through all of that rambling I just wanted to say...Thanks for the great read!!

i think the story is going great. i wish you would update some time soon, unless your done which i would really hate for it to be, or unless stuff came up which means your just being delayed which is ok also.:)

Hey please write more. its such a good story along with all the other ones and i just can't get enough so please write more or i might kill my self of boredom cause your the only person that accually updates there stuff at the same time every day of the week.